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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2000-10-09 10:22 AM


~One More Kiss~

More than heavens stars
count each one as a kiss *
each kiss a shower of eternal lights of love
to love you more would be my wish upon a star
here love...
one more kiss *


BloomingRose


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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-10-09 10:53 AM


Wow my sweet friend, that is alot of kisses you know.  Seems like you might be quite busy for awhile.LOLOL      Lucky man he is very lucky.  Beautiful sentiments with such power behind your words.  
Aimster
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2 posted 2000-10-09 02:44 PM


beautiful! you always write with the heart...and leave your readers smiling. thanks a mil for that.
take care.
amy  

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"


Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2000-10-09 08:11 PM


Came by for more kisses LOL... ...and to let more eyes rest on this beautiful piece.
vlraynes
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Somewhere... out there...
4 posted 2000-10-09 08:19 PM



BloomingRose-
   wow...you've done it again.
   this is just beautiful.  
   i love it.  

   -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


BloomingRose
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5 posted 2000-10-09 08:44 PM


Mark~ Thanks, glad you like the many "kisses" sent from the stars that shine! lol
deb  

Amy~ Thank you for that sweet reply.
Hugs,
deb  


Vicky~ Glad you like this. It's hard to look up at the sky and see the many stars on a clear night, and not see something sweet in a twinkle, and so I thought of a kiss for each star.
Deb  

Janet Marie
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6 posted 2000-10-10 04:00 PM


a lovely premise...
seems we poets have a constant source of inspiration in the stars ..
wonderful writing BR
jm

Dee
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7 posted 2000-10-10 05:12 PM


Short and sweet! A lovely poem with lovely feelings behind it.
Dee

BloomingRose
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8 posted 2000-10-10 08:21 PM


JM! We do seem to dream with the stars. Thanks.

Dee~ Thank you, glad you enjoyed!  

passing shadows
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9 posted 2004-05-16 08:26 PM


precious
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