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This one is in respect of you
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This one is in respect of you |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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Through my window A looking glass Pretty people As they pass Look the other way All another day I sit here I’ll go down And ‘neath rocks I'll search for you I took faith I showed self I thought if Love was true There's the sun Shines my eyes Beautiful girl What if I said It was a Beautiful world [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 10-09-2000).] |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
What if I said... this is a beautiful poem?  It really is Walty love it! Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Hey Walt This is great...the verses are like individual beads strung together, to form one whole string...hope that makes sense! Love the last one in particular, just the way it fits. K |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Wonderful piece walt.....loved it Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
to all ye 3 other side of the worlders thank you much! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
In the eye of a beautiful beholder - the world is indeed beautiful...  |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i am a beauty |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
enjoyed muchly. nicely written. |
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