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Haikus - Ethan's Challenge
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Haikus - Ethan's Challenge |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
loss my heart is breaking I feel the awful aching in my empty chest ---------------------------------------------------- wishes knight with armor bright come rescue me on this night show me to the light ---------------------------------------------------- lighthouse a beacon shines warm providing shelter from storms piercing the darkness ---------------------------------------------------- Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ These are wonderful thoughts. I particularly enjoyed the Lighthouse. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Jen~ These are all beautiful but this one my fav  wishes knight with armor bright come rescue me on this night show me to the light Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent. . . Liked the second one. . . it's not easy to make haiku rhyme. . . I wonder if there's a name for that? And the third one too. . . I've always liked lighthouses. . . Superb. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Marge . . . Thank you my friend. I LOVE lighthouses!! Tracie . . . That's my favorite one too. Just sort of came out. Thanks!! Sven . . . I knew you'd like the second one. Right up your alley. Not sure on the rhyme, it just happened! That wasn't my intent, it just came out like that. Yes, lighthouses are wonderful places. Thank you. Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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