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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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Words, Working, Wrangling. Wanderings, Warped, Windows. Water, For my creative thirsts. Watch me plunge, And burst to the top. Breathless, Beating, Beginning, Being me, Flippant, Forever, Flighty, Indulging my moody muse. Washing myself, Over the shores, Of an exotic perfection. Lover, Left, Lingering. Dreamer, Drowning, Daringly. Lost within ramble, Letting the salt of life, Wash over me. Standing here like a rock. The world's fortress. Who will be my love? My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
perfection in poetry... flowing, adamant, angry, emotional, elusive, daring.... it's a yes, girl, it's a YES!!!! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Temptress~ Oh .... I like this - 'Water, For my creative thirsts. Watch me plunge, And burst to the top.' Held my breath for that one ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Indulging my moody muse.' Yes, definitely something I can relate to! Great write!! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Temptress~ WOW!! very creative...excellent work  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
DOREEN!! Thanks! I'm glad you liked it, and I'm surely glad to see you. Marge: Thanks to you too. The effect I was looking for would have been what you have said. I'm glad you enjoyed it. snowpants: Yep. Moody..or it could just be me who is moody. NO WAY! Glad you liked it. Tracy: Thanks for reading, and for the WOW! I'm glad you enjoyed this one. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the moody muse makes marvelous music showing several shares of herself waking watering writing. . . Cool Jenn!! And btw, I know that you're not moody!!  -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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