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Seymour Tabin
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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2000-10-08 11:09 PM


Vanities Insanity

Speaks to me
High tension fed
Whispering breath
Silt that spills
Molten lead.

Toxins my body
With exotic wine
That runs my gullet
Clear to
My spine.

Shivers my flesh
Waters my eyes
Smothers my ears
And tongue ties
My lies

Holds me enfolds me
In raptures serene
Till I am unconscious
In captured
Obscene.


© Copyright 2000 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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1 posted 2000-10-09 08:58 AM


Geesh, Sy... Sounds like you had quite a night... I sure hope you had fun...
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2000-10-09 09:04 AM


Dearest Nan,
What do you think? Love Sy

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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3 posted 2000-10-09 10:05 AM


Sounds like when I drink me raspberry tea ...
ya just never know how its gonna effect me  
way cool SY-guy...but then you always are..
later-love-ya-when-your-obscene-gator  
me

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
4 posted 2000-10-09 02:46 PM


wow,
now this is an interesting piece of work! and i mean that in a good way...really liked it alot. let me read it again.
take care.
amy  

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"


Sunshine
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5 posted 2000-10-09 02:52 PM


I've some hair of the dog and a huge aspirin, should you be in need...

well done Sy...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
6 posted 2000-10-09 09:11 PM


Aimster,
Thank you for the read, like and WOW.

Sunshine,
A friend in need is a friend indeed. *L*

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