The Silencer (Previously Posted in the Pub)

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Open Poetry #10

The Silencer (Previously Posted in the Pub)

Chanson
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since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

0 posted 2000-10-08 08:31 PM

The Silencer

Once,
you edged near
til buried inside,
reality weakening
my frivolity.

I was absorbed,
my essense guarded
within bonds of acceptence,
strengthening my reserve.

Without restraint
you sheltered,
veins pulsing to life,
my face a radiance
of serenity.

Pooled reflection
in your dark eyes
spoke volumes.
As the blind
reads braille,
so you touched
the blushed pages
of my cheek
in verbless caress,
as one quietly confessing.

Now ill-used;
white, crisp pages,
once speaking to me
become curl-edged parchment
with no voice.

Ink fades into
illegible smudges
of nonchalance.

< !signature-->

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-me, Song of Gesture

[This message has been edited by chansondegeste (edited 10-08-2000).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-10-08 11:30 PM

Chanson~
Oh .... I like this !
The intensity grabbed me and held me.

'As the blind
reads braille,
so you touched
the blushed pages
of my cheek
in verbless caress,
as one quietly confessing.'

Wow !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

2 posted 2000-10-08 11:39 PM

Hi Marge

You highlighted my favorite stanza also.
I'm happy it touched you!

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-me, Song of Gesture

Waverly917
Member

since 2000-09-23

Posts 90
Hugo, MN

3 posted 2000-10-09 04:42 PM

Oooo, I like it! I too like that same stanza.

Abra

"So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains
And we never even know we have the key."
-Already Gone, The Eagles

Kit McCallum

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Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2000-10-09 05:01 PM

Wonderful expression Chanson! Your thoughts are so descriptive here ... this was an enchanting read! Well done!

Best wishes,
/Kit

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

5 posted 2000-10-09 07:49 PM

Abra, thank you! Glad you enjoyed it

< !signature-->

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-me, Song of Gesture

[This message has been edited by chansondegeste (edited 10-09-2000).]

Chanson
Senior Member

since 2000-08-19

Posts 1559
Up Creek w/Out Paddle

6 posted 2000-10-09 07:52 PM

Hello, Kit

I'm pleased you enjoyed.
Thank you!

...chanson~

Music, tonal clear & pure,
Caresses the harshest of curves.
-me, Song of Gesture

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