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lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho

0 posted 2000-10-08 06:43 PM


That’s My Love

Once upon a lifetime
goes you by secretly met the one who’s
made you feel your soul could fly their the one
who made you finally come alive the one who
touched you in exactly the right place
no one else could ever find
they move through
your spirit
filling
your
soul and

mate letting you see yourself
through different light showing you how
you are and become presenting the things you
can accomplish once of course through a lifetime
there’s just one love that will endure the quiz of
time it’s a love so strong it’s a love so true
it’s a love that through all hardships
will survive... it’s my love
for you.


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If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name.  (Michelle A. Bartley)

[This message has been edited by lucky (edited 10-08-2000).]

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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049
California
1 posted 2000-10-08 07:37 PM


Dale--This is so beautiful...and I am so happy for Ruth...who is just starting...and then look at you...with your rich time treasured tapistry...you and Rosemary are treasures!
WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
2 posted 2000-10-08 11:21 PM


This was very sweet and thoughtful of you!
A wonderful tribute to the both of them. I'm sure she'll love it!  

lucky
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since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
3 posted 2000-10-10 12:02 PM


Martie, I love so your writes you have changed so much. Well, I like it..!

WhtDove, I don't hear from you often, I tip my hat that you would notice. thank you.

Dale


Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware
4 posted 2000-10-10 12:15 PM


Lucky - you have the most unique poetic talent I've ever encountered - this is beautiful
Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 997
northern mountains, Idaho
5 posted 2000-10-10 12:07 PM


This is one of my favorites of yours of all time, my sweetheart!
It's such a good one to share with hoot owl, in this time of her joy!
Wonderfully done!



lucky
Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601
Idaho
6 posted 2000-10-10 03:13 PM


Bill, so you think I have a unique poetic talent. Thanks my friend


Rosemary I'm glad you thought of this one to post for her as I was reading to you yonder night. Your my sweet baby_bubba and I know it's one of your favorites, she'll love it... But hopefully at this time..; she's pre-occupied.

many thanks, dale



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Dee
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia
7 posted 2000-10-10 04:07 PM


Beautifully done, Dale. I'm sure they'll love your gift.
Dee

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