Open Poetry #10 |
Dreaming. . . |
Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Everytime I close my eyes All my thoughts seem to turn to you What we could be What we would be If only you would be mine Everytime I close my eyes I dream about your face Your eyes, as blue as the sea Seem to be always looking at me Then you really would be mine Dreams sometimes come true I hope this one will Because you're the only one who can make my dreams come true And I'll love you always Then my dream will become real. . . 7-15-86 ----------------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
I hope your dreams were answered. Very Nice |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ A dream is that special wish made within your heart - When you're really fortunate - they come true ... Lovely thoughts, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Horizon Member
since 2000-10-04
Posts 51 |
Yeah I hear ya, sometimes I wish my dreams would come true. Wonderful poem. |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
very beautiful, Sven. never let go of your dreams. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
inot2B. . . still waiting. . .thank you. . . Marge, then I hope that fortune will smile on me. . . thank you my friend. . . Horizon, it'll happen. . . patience my friend. . . vicky, I never have. . .same to you my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
dreams can come true, beautiful dream poem and if its come true, dont let her slip away.... Charisma |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
Very nice poem Sven. Best of luck in making all your deams come true. Abra "So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains And we never even know we have the key." -Already Gone, The Eagles |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Dreaming of you yet I know not who you are Soul mates searching wondering if they're near or far. Hope you find what you're dreaming of Sven. ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Sven~ Dreams we all hope they come true...the nice ones that is tee hee Well my friend I hope yours come true all you can do is try to be happy Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I wrote this poem a long time ago. . . but the thoughts still echo. . . Charisma, thank you my friend. . . Abra, the same to you. . . thank you. . . Irie, here's to both of us. . . thanks for the verse too! Tracie, sometimes, the not nice ones too. . . and yes, all we can do is just try to be happy. . . thank you my friend. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Sven, a beautiful dream it is and I sincerely hope that it comes true for you soon, I also wish that for myself. Your poetry always makes me melt, your heart was just born romantic! Take care, Melissa Honeybee The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Dreams, the foundation upon which reality can sometimes be built. May the cornerstones of your heart always be those dreams. Dream as big, as you wish my friend. Juls |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And you were this good in 1986... well done, Sven... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Melissa, thank you. . . sometimes, I think that I must have been. . . Juls, I have always dreamt big. . . sometimes too big, but always big. . . thank you my friend. . . Sunshine, I wasn't that good. . . thank you ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Sven, Beautiful write. Never give up faith ~hugs~ ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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