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Sven
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0 posted 2000-10-08 03:14 PM


Everytime I close my eyes
          All my thoughts seem to turn to you
               What we could be
               What we would be
               If only you would be mine

Everytime I close my eyes
          I dream about your face
               Your eyes, as blue as the sea
               Seem to be always looking at me
               Then you really would be mine

Dreams sometimes come true
          I hope this one will
               Because you're the only one
                 who can make my dreams come true
               And I'll love you always
Then my dream will become real. . .


7-15-86

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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inot2B
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1 posted 2000-10-08 03:16 PM


I hope your dreams were answered.
Very Nice

Marge Tindal
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2 posted 2000-10-08 03:18 PM


Sven~
A dream is that special wish
made within your heart -
When you're really fortunate -
they come true ...
Lovely thoughts, my friend.
~*Marge*~


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3 posted 2000-10-08 03:22 PM


Yeah I hear ya, sometimes I wish my dreams would come true. Wonderful poem.  
vlraynes
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4 posted 2000-10-08 03:22 PM



very beautiful, Sven.
never let go of your dreams.  

-vicky




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heart, you have not truely met the poet."
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Sven
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5 posted 2000-10-08 03:50 PM


inot2B. . . still waiting. . .thank you. . .

Marge, then I hope that fortune will smile on me. . . thank you my friend. . .  

Horizon, it'll happen. . . patience my friend. . .

vicky, I never have. . .same to you my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Charisma
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6 posted 2000-10-08 04:25 PM


dreams can come true,
beautiful dream poem
and if its come true, dont let her slip away....

Charisma

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7 posted 2000-10-08 05:01 PM


Very nice poem Sven.  Best of luck in making all your deams come true.

Abra

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And we never even know we have the key."
-Already Gone, The Eagles

Irie
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8 posted 2000-10-08 05:19 PM


Dreaming of you
yet I know not who you are
Soul mates searching
wondering if they're near or far.

Hope you find what you're dreaming of Sven.


~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"

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9 posted 2000-10-09 05:57 AM


Sven~
Dreams we all hope they come true...the nice ones that is  tee hee  
Well my friend I hope yours come true all you can do is try to be happy
Love Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Sven
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10 posted 2000-10-09 12:34 PM


I wrote this poem a long time ago. . . but the thoughts still echo. . .

Charisma, thank you my friend. . .  

Abra, the same to you. . . thank you. . .  

Irie, here's to both of us. . . thanks for the verse too!  

Tracie, sometimes, the not nice ones too. . .    and yes, all we can do is just try to be happy. . . thank you my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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11 posted 2000-10-09 12:38 PM



Sven, a beautiful dream it is and I sincerely hope that it comes true for you soon, I also wish that for myself. Your poetry always makes me melt, your heart was just born romantic!  

Take care,
Melissa Honeybee


The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



juliet_2u
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12 posted 2000-10-09 12:56 PM


Dreams, the foundation upon which reality can sometimes be built. May the cornerstones of your heart always be those dreams. Dream as big, as you wish my friend.
Juls

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13 posted 2000-10-09 01:01 PM


And you were this good in 1986...

well done, Sven...

Sven
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14 posted 2000-10-09 07:09 PM


Melissa,    thank you. . . sometimes, I think that I must have been. . .

Juls, I have always dreamt big. . . sometimes too big, but always big. . . thank you my friend. . .

Sunshine, I wasn't that good. . . thank you  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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15 posted 2000-10-09 07:45 PM


Sven,

   Beautiful write. Never give up faith ~hugs~

~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

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