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Vaya Con Dios
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Vaya Con Dios ~*Marge Tindal*~ In a courtyard cafe on the east side of town I danced with abandon as the sun went down The music softly played a guitar serenade long before the night had yet begun to fade Lost in sweet abandon in eyes of ebony the music played in serenade bringing him closer to me One red rose he offered placing it in my hair we danced as if there was magic in the air Just before the dawning he kissed me tenderly Vaya Con Dios, my darling he left his heart with me I swear I'd died and gone to Heaven no rapture was more complete Vaya Con Dios, my darling he swept me off my feet Surely on the morrow with awakened need I'll swear that he was there in more than just my dream Vaya Con Dios, my darling May God tend you in His care ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge- wow...this one pulled me in and held me all the way through. this is soooo romantic. i just love it.  love and hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Me voi - con dios - la pan de la vida - la copa divina - to feel such love - is heavenly - well done Marge ~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning. ~ Billy Wilder |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
soooo romantic *sigh* it remains me on a book that I ever had lend from the library..Vaya con Dios...and your poem was romantic as that book....great work. btw...thank you for the visit on my homepage, and that you had taken the time to sign my guestbook. I allready visit your homepage last week, and signed your guestbook too, I loved it and have bookmarked it, for another visit soon. Charisma |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ That's the dreamy dream I get for falling asleep to Paco de Lucía and his fabulous flamenco guitar music ! Ahhhhhhh ! What a dream that wrote itself ! Wilfred~ Ahhh ! It is so ! Thank you. Charisma~ Thank you. I'm so very glad you liked it. Thanks for signing my guestbook also. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ooh Margie-girl .... ya take us cross the border with this beauty.. loved this one... spicy, spainsh, sensual spin ... i love when you write romantic like this... now can ya do a mexican hat dance for us..with that rose in your mouth.. me thinks me would pay to see it  LOLlater-make-a-run-for-the-border-gator jm |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ Girl ! You'd better send that check ! You can just bet your sombrero I can do it !  Come on ... join me ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ROTFLMAO...I SHOULD HAVE KNOWN BETTER!!!!  OK--OK ... DO YA TAKE CREDIT CARDS LOL AND OF COURSE ... YOU HAVE THE PERFECT GRAPHIC TO GO WITH IT... (and wait till Mark gets here) WELL WHAT THE HECK.. I WILL JOIN YA... WE'LL DO THE FANDANGO TANGO ... whats a few more thorns in me lips ...  your a wild woman Margie-gator.. CANNED HEAT!!!!! LOL |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
You Stinker..! I read the title and I was afraid to read it. So I got Rosemary to read it first. So your back at it. Good... I can start barking again. You do know this is a little off your beaten trail. You kown somethin' I like it. Love & Caring Dale |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Marge-- a most beautiful way to say good bye...and a dream like only you can do it. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
JanetMarie~ Tee-Hee ! Love ya' gal ! Where IS that rascal MarkB~? Lucky~ Awwwwww ! Bless your heart ! I could just hug your neck ! Sweetie - do I have a 'beaten trail' ? Well ... I just zigged when I shoulda' zagged !  Martie~ Oh, isn't it just the loveliest phrase ? It was a dream worth returning to ... any night ! Love you~ ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Wow, that's some dream, Marge! Great poem! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Denise~ It was a WONDERFUL dream ! Yummy, in fact. Thanks for liking. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Wow, Marge! What a great poem! You had me captivated through the entire thing! (I wish I could have dreams like that!) sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SnowPants~ Thank you. And I wish I could have them more often ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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roselee Junior Member
since 2000-09-22
Posts 26 |
Your writing is excellent, the poem flowed so smoothly. You have a great talent for poetry. Hope to see more. |
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Lady Lost Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 470 |
You are so cool Marge! This is one of the most romantic poems I have ever read...does this guy have any brothers?< !signature--> "And I still believe you can never have too much fiction because reality is such a bore..." - REA [This message has been edited by Lady Lost (edited 10-10-2000).] |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh Marge, Marge, Marge. Yep this is quiet the little poem you've penned here. You took me right there with you. And though it was indeed wonderful seeing you all swept away, I have a question. Does he have a brother by any chance? LOL...Girl this is great. Juls |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
I am here my sweet. I have just been sitting at my table enjoying the music and all you know. This is a side of you that I truely love my friend. The romance in the air as only you can bring to us in the complexity of it's simplicity. Loved it loved it loved it....and what is all this talk about silly graphics???? |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RoseLee~ Thank you so much. LadyLost~ LOL ! I'll let ya' know. Juliet~ Thanks, gal. I'm looking for those brothers ! MarkB~ Hello, luv. Glad to know the music plays on ! What silly graphics ????????? JanetMarie started it ! Honest Injun ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Marge-This was awesome. You rock. I think I will go south of the border see if I can bring back a Latin lover, better yet I think maybe I will just stick with some Mescal con gunsano, only kidding! Never could understand how anyone could drink a tequilla with a worm in it. They say it increases potency, maybe it would give me a dream or two like yours, but I could never capture it as well as you did. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Gemini~ I thank you for the accolades. I did it all on a Coca~Cola ... minus the worm. Ewwwww ! Glad you enjoyed it. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wow Marge you've conjured up some vivid imagery on this piece! This piece has a western feel to it or something to me and it's just excellent and very entertaining! This piece just illustrates your beautiful talents! Peace! Nathan |
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