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Open Poetry #10

Love Sonnet -a Bit Silly

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

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Wilmington, Delaware

0 posted 2000-10-08 11:58 AM

What has happened that I should love thee
Without reserve without shame so fiercely
What potion was drank what magic in draught
Thought of life without you should make me distraught

I wrote you poems of our consummation
You wrote poems too my anticipation
All I could dream is our conflagration
I worry at times I get indigestion

Oft do I dream you and I walking beaches
Or laying in forests - live oaks and beeches
My blood courses so I think I need leeches
Dr. Seuss help me where are your sneeches?

This sonnet is serious it also is silly
Can't live without you my life's willy nilly

~You have to have a dream so you can get up in the morning.

~ Billy Wilder

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2000-10-08 12:05 PM

This sonnet is wonderful with a combination of all kinds of feelings!!!! Isn't that what love feels like??
I enjoyed this tremendously!

Follow your dream!

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

2 posted 2000-10-08 02:41 PM

Sunny1-
Perhaps you're right - riding the roller coaster feeling - has been a ong time absent - I hope the ride isn't short - thank you

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

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3 posted 2000-10-08 07:45 PM

Bill--this is precious and sweet..and only a little bit silly...and that's a good thing!

Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17

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missouri

4 posted 2000-10-08 11:18 PM

Not silly just wonderfully alive with love

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

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5 posted 2000-10-08 11:21 PM

Wil, love it..it made me smile..

Wilfred Yeats
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since 2000-08-04

Posts 2704
Wilmington, Delaware

6 posted 2000-10-09 08:22 AM

Martie, Paula, Victoria-

Thank you all for your kind words - I don't know what gets 'into' my pen at times - it must have been bitten by the same 'love bug' that got me ~S~

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