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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-10-08 07:48 AM


Bronzed

Torn of heart, you left me here
the many years now worn.
Taunted, by the many words
that rose upon each morn.

Memories are shaded now
in grays and hues of death.
You've taken all I had to give
and left me little breath.

The heaviness within my chest
replaces love once held.
Each draw I take is shallower
than the thoughts that I now weld.

And cast in bronze, forever saved
a reminder, not of then
Instead of what not to behold
when loving once again.

Said many times, would never leave,
abandoning not thought.
Lies before and after each
are all that you had brought.

And gifted me with heart so torn
that even if a thread
Were made of gold to stitch it up
the hurt, I'd never shed.

At times you tease me, almost if
I mean so much to you.
Yet in the very next of words
expelled I'm left no clue.

These feelings mixed, say much right now
yet not so clear of mind.
Direction searching for a way
a mended heart to find.

M
10*2k



© Copyright 2000 Maureen - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-10-08 07:57 AM


Hoping you are able to work it all out soon.  I know it is hard and when it bounces back and forth it is even harder.  Hang in there.
MMoonchild
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2 posted 2000-10-08 08:04 AM


Do I seem like I am bouncing?...It's just I am not feeling too well and am in one of my Moonchild moods...it too shall pass...and I was inspired elsewhere by a thought of a heart torn and stitched...you  read my feelings well Mark
~~soft thanks and hugs
M

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