navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #10 » Mina my Love
Open Poetry #10
Post A Reply Post New Topic Mina my Love Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2000-10-08 05:53 AM


Mina my Love

A joy for my ears to hear
to make my weary heart rejoice
soothing words taking my blues away
as found within the sweetness of your voice.
A happy heart receives your call
believing someone cares for me afterall.
A desire to be friends and lovers too
all my love I'll give to you.
Oh how I love to feel the softness of you
and see the effervescence of a lovely tan
while touching silky soft skin
flowing within my eager hand.
Walking in the mall
without you would be a bore
now two can enjoy this movie
called "The Art of War".
Mina my Love I take this momemt
to caress your silky legs I adore
and I deeply desire this touch and more.
Later outside the gentle trade winds
are flowing thru the graceful palm trees
and while lying in the park with you
under stately banyon trees
my heart ponders my love for you
and I have to take this moment in time
to hope and pray
I'll always be yours
and you'll be mine.
Oh how I admire the woman that you are
and appreciate everything you say and do
and Mina my Love the favorite part of my day
is when I'm spending time with you.

Jameslee@October07,2000
LovemyMina


© Copyright 2000 JamesMichael - All Rights Reserved
Charisma
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Ascendant
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906
lost in blue pages
1 posted 2000-10-08 07:44 AM


James, this is so beautiful, as all your other poetry, truly from the heart.
it's always a pleasure to read your poems, and Mina is truly lucky to have a man that adore's her.....well done

Charisma

Victoria
Deputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Ascendant
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869

2 posted 2000-10-08 09:50 AM


Lovely James..I use to live in Hawaii ten years ago..and loved it...got to be too far away from things for me but sometimes i wonder why i moved ha ha..but the banyon trees and palm trees and the ocean is what inspired me to write poetry...very sweet poem.
Aimster
Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
3 posted 2000-10-08 12:38 PM


James~
you go straight for the heart in your work. very lovely, beautiful, a and full of grace. i am very happy for you and mina. tis a lucky thing one finds when they come across true love.

take care.
amy  

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"


emily
Member
since 2000-10-03
Posts 142
USA
4 posted 2000-10-08 12:54 PM


This is great, I just can't work up enough courage to post my poetry, everyone else's is so neat!  But soon I will For now I just love reading all of it.
Sven
Deputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Laureate
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA
5 posted 2000-10-08 01:17 PM


James my friend. . .

I cannot begin to say enough about how wonderful your writing has become since Mina. . . truly my friend, she has inspired you and stolen your heart. . .

I am happy for both of you. . .

This is just a wonderful example of that. . .

Well done. . .

--------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

6 posted 2000-10-08 01:41 PM


ahhh sweetbabyjames ...
ya know we love ya in love...
and your wearing it well and looking sharp...
this is a tender, sincere, look at her thru
your eyes ...
its a thing of beauty to behold  
wonderful words ...
she does indeed inspire sweet things in you
later-in-love-gator
jm

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
7 posted 2000-10-08 05:53 PM


Thank you Charisma, Victoria, amy, emily, Sven and Janet for beautiful responses...I am so happy...
emily I am patiently waiting for your post...James

SEA
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 5 Tours
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676
with you
8 posted 2000-10-08 09:12 PM


James~ I wish my man would write for me this way......jeez, you are such a romantic man......women must fall all over themselves around you.   -SEA
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
9 posted 2000-10-11 06:07 AM


Thank you Sea...perhaps he will someday...I agree with you that I am romantic but women do not take any special notice of me...well sometimes they do but not as often as I would like...anyway Mina is the most beautiful woman in Hawaii and I have my hands full admiring her...James
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #10 » Mina my Love

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary