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she's lonely... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... 
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'she's lonely'... the words echo over and over in my mind you speak the truth but how did you know once again my eyes have revealed what my lips were unable to utter though my voice remained silent my eyes spoke to you and you listened to them intently you heard you understood you knew 'she's lonely'... the words continue to haunt me as i slowly close my eyes and hide within the safety of an empty soul -vlraynes |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
 this is not my favorite...its, uh..well, its rather lonely.... but well written all the same  big hugs! dg she doesnt want the kind of love she can live with--she wants the kind she cant live without -clint black |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ You imparted a feeling of sadness that envelopes many people at times. This one is blue Sending smiles -   ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
dg- sorry you don't really care for this one...and its lonely nature. thanks for reading ((((BIG HUGS BACK TO YOU)))) Marge- hi, friend. i was just having a particularly sad and lonely day yesterday, and decided to post this oldie. i feel much better today though. thanks somuch for the smiles.  smiles back to you love you both, -vicky < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-08-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
So my friend...does today find you happier than when you wrote this? I sincerely hope so...but just in case, How about a big ole cowboy {{{{HUG}}}} Don't know how I missed this one but it does happen...I am only here reading 22 out of the 24 hours in day most of the time...but lately it has been put down to about 20....that must be it. So are you smiling yet? |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Oh the eyes are a mirror to the soul! I hope you're not so lonely anymore. ?? You've written it out perfectly! <*\\\>< I know not what the future holds, but I know Who holds the future. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
vlraynes, Well done. This is just sensational. "though my voice remained silent my eyes spoke to you" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
There is always a reason for the ones that can read our eyes...it's a gift few have...you penned this honestly and although it was sad, you said the next day was better...the power of poetry and friends~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Mark- well now...how could i not be happier after that wonderful cowboy hug. yes...i am MUCHhappier now than the day this was written. lol...only 20 hourshuh?...you slacker...lol. yep....smiling real big oh...and another smile...thank you my cowboy friend WhtDove- i am much less lonely now...thank you so much for the kind reply. so glad you enjoyed. Daniel- wow..thank you so much for the enthusiastic reply...your kind words are sincerely appreciated. Butterflies_dont_cry- thank you so much for you sweet reply. yes...it is a special thing when we find someone who looks close enough to read our eyes...and the the power of poetry and friends is a wonderful thing as well...i don't know what i would do without either of them. hugs to all of you, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
every poem is my favorite because they all come from a poet's heart! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
to be able to read not only through your eyes but with them. . . excellent. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Vicky, Feelings like this can be very powerful at times. So glad to hear that you are feeling better my friend. Sad writing, but very good. Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
I too, have known those seasons of emptiness and sorrow. Well put, my friend, and I'm glad to know you're feeling better. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Vicki~ Very sad honey...the pain, sorrow and lonliness all felt here a winged ~HUG~ sent your way Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Vicky... Lonliness is such a sad state of mind, but it's not a stranger to any one of us. Aren't we lucky that we a place to go where friends gather, where we can share? You did a good job writing about a hard subject, my friend!  Follow your dream! |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
dont like you to be sad.. so glad youre happier these days!! good to "see" you smile hugs, dg< !signature--> my soul is painted like the wings of butterflies...fairytales of yesterday will grow but never die...i can fly--my friends -Queen [This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 10-23-2000).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Sad and lonely days help us to appreciate the beauty of our happy ones...I like this |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
IrishRose- thanks for reading. glad you liked this. Sven- so glad you enjoyed this. thanks for the kind reply. Lone Wolf- yes, my friend...i am much better now. thank you so much for always being so sweet in your replies to my poems. really glad you like this. Rosemary- thank you so much for the kind words. really glad you enjoyed this. Tracie- thank you for the hug my friend...and i send it right back to you. i so appreciate your sweet replies. glad you like this. Sunny- oh yes..how i love this place and all the friends i've made here...you included. thank you so much for your kind words. they mean alot to me. dg- awe...you're so good to me, my friend. good to be smiling again. thanks so much for being such a good friend to me always. ((((HUGS))))Paula- how right you are...and my days are much happier now. thank you, my friend...glad you like this. hugs to all, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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