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seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

0 posted 2000-10-08 12:19 PM

Doesn't seem so long ago...
Only a matter of seconds.
Not the years,
That have really passed.

Holding hands,
Under skys brimming in stars.
Rockets going off,
Tender kisses the ignitor.

Marriage
Ended all that.

And I became your
Nemesis.
Your antagonist.
Married in name
Only.
Ruined spirit
Edged in bruises.

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

1 posted 2000-10-08 12:22 PM

Whoa! Excellent write, but I'm sorry to hear if things are really that way! But, a great write, nonetheless! I like it!!

sp

Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

2 posted 2000-10-08 12:30 PM

Oh Seraphin ... there's such sorrow behind these difficult words you've penned. All too often, they can be related to by many. Hugs to you for this heart-wrenching and powerful poem.

Best wishes,
/Kit

Justbleu
Member Elite

since 1999-08-31

Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)

3 posted 2000-10-08 12:31 PM

Though I've never married I feel I know what "THOSE" feelings are like!! Nice writing....hope to read more!! I hope all is well!!

Take Care,
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown

BirdeeB
Member

since 2000-09-16

Posts 106
USA

4 posted 2000-10-08 01:01 AM

I know those feelings too some where along the way..eveything hurts..
BirdeeB

"So don't judge me by my failures, only by my dreams" SR71

seraphin
Senior Member

since 2000-09-24

Posts 1004
Michigan

5 posted 2000-10-08 10:22 PM

Again, thank you for your words. Sandi

Irie
Senior Member

since 1999-12-01

Posts 1493
Washington State

6 posted 2000-10-08 10:27 PM

You know Sandi, You've said this so well.
To the point and with great strength and conviction.
If I didn;t know better, I'd say you've been watching my life and wrote this.
I know just where you are coming from hun!
Hugs!
And look, it's yet another man that needs a poke in the eye!

~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

7 posted 2000-10-08 10:33 PM

It is such a shame that when two people get married that all of a sudden it seems that all the romance and the trying goes out the window. If only people could love tomorrow the same way they do today ALWAYS....then the growth of love would be so wonderous. Your words ring so much truth that they hurt and I hurt for you but I too have been there and YOU WILL see the sunshine and feel it's warmth again someday.

HUGS TO YOU.

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