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heartacheguy
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since 2000-07-16
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0 posted 2000-10-07 11:56 PM


i wrote this poem about a girl who i really like but don't know all of the right words to say but i think this should break the ice ...............

why do I always think about you??
is it your cute pleasant smile??
is it the way you make me laugh??
is it the way you make me feel??
is it because you always look out after me
like a sister or a mother??
is it the warm feeling that you put into my heart??

when i go to sleep at night,all that I can think about is an angel which is you.
all I can do is dream about your beautiful presence everyday
thats why i am always thinking of you  


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snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
1 posted 2000-10-08 12:10 PM


All I have to say is...TELL HER!!  I know I'd DEFINITELY want someone to let me know if they were thinking of me the way you're thinking of her!!  Very romantic write!!

sp  


Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

Waverly917
Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90
Hugo, MN
2 posted 2000-10-08 03:05 PM


I agree with snowpants, definately tell her.  At least ler her know she means something special to you.  Good luck1  

Abra

"So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains
And we never even know we have the key."
-Already Gone, The Eagles

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