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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Catch A Memory ~*Marge Tindal*~ Catch that memory as it floats by Squeeze it Please it Wring it dry Play it Say it Cry it Don't just rush on by it Yours for the taking tears it will be making Cry 'em Shed 'em Dry 'em Spread 'em Now go on catch a memory as it floats past squeezing is pleasing until it's the last teardrop left within you to cry |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Marge, my friend- This is so beautiful, and so touching. Even though the memories are sometimes painful, we need them to survive; and without the pain, how are we to recognize and appreciate the happiness.  So good to see a new post from you. My thoughts and prayers continue to be with you, my friend. love and hugs, -vicky < !signature--> "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes [This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 10-07-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"Cry 'em Shed 'em Dry 'em Spread 'em" I love this Marge! Each memory deserves our utmost attention, savour it and reach into the depths until spent ... only then, can we move on to the next. Beautiful writing Marge! Best wishes, /Kit [This message has been edited by Kit McCallum (edited 10-07-2000).] |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Marge~ You've said this perfectly and tenderly Memories are to be held and as tight as can be, never to be let go of. Without our memories we have nothing well written and said Love ya Marge Tracie~ Memories woven Memories spun Memories entwined into one ~~~ A lifetime of memories Bound an wrapped up tight Only to be opened In dead of night ~~~ When in the dark I need them to keep To warm me and give me The comfort I seek ~~~ My memories are all that I have To keep me alive Keep my soul soaring My heart beating in time ~~~ Memories woven, spun And entwined Locked and bound In the depth of my mind ~~~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Marge-A memory filled with all these feelings should be caught and chained to not be let go of. Very nicely done. |
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Marilyn Member Elite
since 1999-09-26
Posts 2621Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful Marg! Exactly how I look at things. Feel 'em and let 'em go. There is always sweet mixed in with any bitter. Well said my friend. When you are old and grey and full of sleep, And nodding by the fire, take down this book, And slowly read, and dream of the soft look Your eyes had once, and of their shodows deep; How many loved your moments of glad grace, And loved your beauty with love false or true, But one man loved the pilgrim soul in you, And loved the sorrows of your changing face... William Butler Yeats |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Tell it like it is, MArge!!! There are two great pleasures in life....making memories and enjoying them.  make that three....reading your poetry!!! |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Ah those precious memories Marge....and when you find yourself smiling through those tears, that's when we realize just how treasured the memories are. So much feeling, written as always, beautifully. Bonnie |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Vicky~ Thank you, dear little friend. Kit~ Thanks ... and you're right ! Tracie~ I know what you mean ! And your verse is just beautiful ... I hope you'll post it so others can enjoy it. Gemini~ Thanks, hon. Marilyn~ I appreciate your thoughts. Thanks. Balladeer~ A big 10-4 on the first two and a *HUG* for # 3 !  Bonnie~ I thank you, my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
An old (I never knew her young) maiden aunt I had - (long since dead) would often quote a verse to me: When you get old and cannot see Put on your specs and think of me (And I do) - a Memory of her I treasure is laying in bed with her early sunday mornings - reading the funnies and listening to the 'Blue Rabbit Bus' on the radio... I must have been 7 or less |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Memories found in the words we have shared will always be with me in everyday of my life Each time I walk in a meadow I will think of you and the memory will be there to remind me of the times we hold true Marge my friend, I have many memories and since being in Passions I have been blessed with so many more HAPPY ones because of you and you wonderful heart. Hugs and love to you my friend. [This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 10-08-2000).] |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marge.... I love catching memories.....they are like little photographs in the mind!! I also loved reading this poem, my friend.....you are wonderful!!! Follow your dream! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge, don't try don't make me cry, wont catch my memory I'll try to hold my eyes dry. so I keep on smiling. love and enjoyed reading your poem Charisma |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Such strength in these words, Marge! Some memories come unbidden - the kind you resist because you don't want to recall, but they do have to come and you do have to cry. Well said, dear lady. Corinne |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
And I will catch many memories before they float by Thank u for this one Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Wilfred~ Glad to have evoked a memory. Thank you for replying. MarkB~ *Hugging* you back, my friend. Sunny1~ I like those 'photographs'! Thank you. Charisma~ Enjoyed your take on it. Thanks for the reply. Corinne~ Your understanding touches me. I appreciate you. Maria~ Grab 'em and hold on ! Fits your signature - PERFECTLY ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Lady Marge...your pen did you proud on this one..all the colours of yesterday...bittersweet and beautiful [This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 10-13-2000).] |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Marge, what a wonderfully written memento. Memories come to us, we pick at them, we often cherish them, we store them away. They are like boomerangs, always returning. |
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linda munday Member
since 2000-06-17
Posts 315Adelaide, Australia |
ah hah ah hah. It's the way you say it that makes it so pleaurable........ you write so well...I'm jealous Linda Munday p.s. I looked at the Sad Dance by Martie....... simply lovely. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Marge this is marvellous a really beautiful poem. One of my favourite sayings, and I've no idea where it came from, is 'memories are the paints we use to colour in our lives' and it always reminds me of rainbows, a lovely piece of work Marge. I love this. Marsha  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Paula~ Thank you for your sweet reply. JD~ I love the boomerang effect ! Linda~ I appreciate that you take time to enjoy what I write and to let me know. Marsha~ I like your saying - Yes, it's true - our memories are the beautiful colors of life. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Marge, your words remind me to cherish each moment, and ride each note in every song...Very Good!! Robert Joseph |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marge~ at this time I'm reflecting on all my memories of my Aunt that passed away on the 5th......I miss her so much but I have such wonderful memories of that I hold tight in my heart.loved this poem -SEA |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Lovely Marge..i love reading your poems..and memories are a wonderful thing..sometimes that is all we have of someone..Hugs.. A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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