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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Is it possible for a love to be only a possession? Is it possible to love beyond comprehension? And can a love seem to be Beyond words, beyond reality? I don't know sometimes if I can spend another wakeful minute. Of a day in my life without you in it. I honor your request for me to stay away. So I hold you respectfully at bay. Do you feel safe when you're away from me? I feel safe in knowing you're still in my memory. You do what's best for you in wanting to be free. All I know is the pain in my heart for having let you go is killing me. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
hey Gemini, I really loved this, the last two lines really hit me. Great poem  "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Dark Angel: Thank you, glad you liked. |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
A sad but beautiful poem. Abra "So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains And we never even know we have the key." -Already Gone, The Eagles |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Gemini.... You show strength in this poem, and you also show us what love means, as letting go is the greatest love of all.... Beautiful job, my friend... Follow your dream! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Gemini~ full of longing and pain but written with true grace and elegance. beautiful hon. take care. amy "The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Is it possible for a love to be only a possession? Is it possible to love beyond comprehension? And can a love seem to be Beyond words, beyond reality? I don't know sometimes if I can spend another wakeful minute. Of a day in my life without you in it. ================ *sigh* ... more mirrors ... yes....it is possible ... and yes..it hurts this much... but sometimes things are just too intense to not take the risk for ... and sometimes letting go ..is the only way to show them how we really feel ... another emotionally well expressed poem Gem, felt your words..your ache. take care jm |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
As we must do later with our children - we must give roots and wings - let go - if they return it is meant to be. I've known this pain - trust and pray - you've expressed yourself beautifully (also a Gemini ~S~) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Gemini, expressed so wonderfully, and if it's meant to be then it will be. Still it's very hard to live through, I know, but you will. Take care Marsha |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Waverly 917-Thank you. Sunny1-I appreciate your thoughtful comments. Aimster-Your words mean much to me thank you for your kindness. Janet Marie-Thank you for your thoughts and kind feelings. Wilfred-I do pray-alot. Thanks for your words of kindness. Marsha-I appreciate, thank you. |
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