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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2000-10-07 09:45 PM


Words Too Loud


Hands over ears, too loud to hear
life in a handbasket, slung to and fro
rocky roads are hard to stay on
easily tossed aside
thrown off balance, I spill

Shattered hearts mend slow
picked up off the floor
hold me close till the morning light
sunshine at your door
beckons for more

BloomingRose




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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-10-07 11:40 PM


Deb, my friend.  I know that there are pains in life that hurt worse than others but you know that with each day we have a gift bestowed on us that is meant to remind us just how important we are....sort of like little hugs......take them and find peace in them my sweet friend.  HUGS to ya my friend and holding you tight til mornings light.  

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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-10-08 07:44 AM


Too noisy way back here so let's put you back on top where it is quieter.
Charisma
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3 posted 2000-10-08 07:56 AM


yes, sometimes are words too loud,
hope that you will feel better soon.

Charisma

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4 posted 2000-10-08 08:08 AM


I know how that is.  I'm going through some of the same things.  This piece made me feel good that you can put your feelings into understandable words, because sometimes mine tend to lose the feel in the randomness. I hope that you feel better soon..

Love,
Lady


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