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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Hot Pursuit Your plans for this evening are about to change The course you had mapped has been rearranged The road you travel, an alternative route A detour in which you are the object of pursuit. It doesn’t matter which way you run My snares are universal, nothing left undone, No chance of escape, you might as well admit Surrender to me now, you must submit. All is prepared, not a thing to do Give me what I desire, I desire you, So strip away your polite niceties Your tendency to be ill-at-ease, Give me a night of total obsession I’ll give you all – I’m your possession All your dreams, fantasies I’m the one you want to please. © 2000 Corinne Bailey |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
ok, i'll say it again... WOW!!! *g... doreen is speechless...and that's quite a feet...  i hope this doesn't scare him away! lol... whoa! pretty darn powerful stuff there, corinne... does he have insurance?  |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
ok then, I give up.... have your way with me... lol Your wish is my command mistress...  I'd better stop dreaming and take a cold shower. Park |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
WOW! Loved this Corinne ... somebody on the receiving end of this, is gonna be one happy camper!  Great writing and incredible expression! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks Doreen! Yes, well, I hope he IS insured, he's gonna need it! LOL Parker, a shower at the end of the dock? *S* Thank you, Kit! Been thinking about writing something along these lines, it was harder than I thought it would be! Corinne |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Alright looks like I'm free this evening and I like a woman that knows what she wants...let's go there...James |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Corinne~ You hot little number you ! I love it .... and so will he ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Fire it up Corinne--full speed ahead!! Great poem! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Corinne....there's nothing trivial about hot pursuit from you  |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
James, are you sure? LOL Thanks, Marge, although writing this response on a Sunday morning, I feel just a tad naughty now! Thanks, Martie! Balladeer - thanks, but oh what a game it is! Corinne |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Corinne, I like a gal that takes the bit in her mouth. Wonderful poem. Sy |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
OMG, sweet poet Core. by all means.... derail me and nail me your plans are my plans and all are so grand Love, Rick and, yes, I DO carry insurance I'm also a happy and very blessed camper[This message has been edited by RAM (edited 10-08-2000).] |
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Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I'LL HAVE WHAT SHE'S HAVIN'...  |
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The Lonely Stranger Member
since 1999-06-18
Posts 361Upstate, NY, USA |
Ah yes, the eternal challenge we hunt as we are being hunted. It's a wonder that the predator ever catches the prey. TLS Some men see things as they are and ask "WHY ?" I see things as they could be and ask "WHY NOT ?" |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
I wanted to respond, but my wife just got up. Gooood poem. Melton |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
it seems like a perfect time to repost an oldie, sooooo.... Let's Not Be Sweet Tonight ~~ ~~ Pick out some clothing you won't miss. Come waste my body with your kiss. Let's redefine our wedded bliss. Let's not be sweet tonight. ~~ We'll drain our inhibitions' well, refilling it with passion's swell. Let's taste the strength of primal selves. Let's not be sweet tonight. ~~ Come feel the wall against your breasts, as every length of cell is pressed. Let's light some candles with our flesh. Let's not be sweet tonight ~~ Then, when our rapture's wheel has spun, and precious sleep gives way to sun, we'll greet a tender morning..........but let's not be sweet tonight. ~~ ~~ © RAM |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
wow! I remember this one, sweet poet! Let's see if I can dig up an old dress to wear! LOL Corinne |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Corinne I'll try as hard as I can to strip off all my polite niceties...ha..ha..sorry you got me going on this one...james |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
One love slave - very available - 555-1212 wowee wow wow wow! (passing the crown to Corinne) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
A bit of obsession is always healthy.... wow Corinne you go girl. Excellent stuff, almost tempted to offer myself as a love slave but I am shackled to bed post here. Loved the poem great bait "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thanks, James, Wilfred and Brian! But Bill, you forgot your area code! LOL A bit on the wild side, always feel kind of odd after I post something that's well, extreme. Corinne |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Corinne - Two things - #1 - this will put you back on page 1 #2 - the '555' part will get you information at best regardless of the other digits (learned that from the numbers recited in movies and TV shows) (just wanted to show the extremity of my response matched the quality of your writing ) |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
Wow, Connie! ~fans self~ I can't decide if this target should feel flattered, lucky, or scared! I really like this. A fantastic piece and a most enjoyable read. ~ Beth |
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