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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-10-07 05:20 PM


Majestic mountains in the moonlight
adorned with ebony and golden hair
soft whispers of the wind in the night
hold secrets of the love we once shared

Shadows of eagles soar the mountain peaks
as the legends of lovers haunt their nests
the wings of our love grow strong not weak
protecting eagles from winds east and west

The echos of love serenade the dark
song of lovers from far away lands
maybe the legend will ignite a spark
I see a vision of us holding hands

Wings of bald eagles haunt the mountains
Our sweet love in the rain is their fountain




Reach high, for stars lie hidden in your soul.
Dream deep, for every dream precedes the goal.

© Copyright 2000 Victoria - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2000-10-07 07:11 PM


Oh, wow. Very beautiful. I enjoyed this very much
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2 posted 2000-10-07 07:27 PM


this is beautiful....
a lovely poem, and I enjoyed it very much.


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3 posted 2000-10-07 07:29 PM


oooohhhh I love this, excellent Victoria  
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4 posted 2000-10-07 08:19 PM


Great writing, Fabulous!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

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5 posted 2000-10-07 08:29 PM


thank you Horizon, Charisma, dark angel and thank you again Eagle one..means so much to have all your support..
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6 posted 2000-10-07 10:00 PM


Victoria~
Such a lovely opening stanza~

'Majestic mountains in the moonlight
adorned with ebony and golden hair
soft whispers of the wind in the night
hold secrets of the love we once shared'


Certainly captured a moment.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Victoria
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7 posted 2000-10-07 10:01 PM


Welcome again Marge ha ha..so glad you enjoy my poetry..appreciate your thoughtfulness.
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8 posted 2000-10-07 10:07 PM


Wow Victoria this is a real beauty. What images it brought to mind.
Juls

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9 posted 2000-10-07 10:13 PM


I wrote it a while back..just thought i would post it here in Passions..thank you Juliet for reading..
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10 posted 2000-10-08 10:58 AM


This has got to be one of my favorites of yours.  The beauty of this just stands out.  I don't know how I missed it before but I am so glad that I was able to catch up to it.  
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11 posted 2000-10-08 11:36 AM


This is indeed a very beautiful poem.

Abra

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And we never even know we have the key."
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