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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2000-10-07 02:41 PM


The Last Dance ~ For You


Face to face...
behind closed doors, the floor is ours
step closer, the music has begun
spin me near till your heartbeat I feel

Capture the vision, in soulful eyes
as we dance this last dance

BloomingRose


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Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-10-07 03:03 PM




Dance with me
upon this
moonlit night
as we glide upon
the wanderings of
our love's delight
and find
what we have so long
sought in the weary
capsules of castles
in the sand.




Deb, this was beautiful and I hope you don't mind a poetic reply to your poem...it just sort of came over me.lol  Good inspiration you are.  

You may share it with the one that the poem was for and if he don't mind I just sort of spoke for him.  Once again, A very beautiful poem my friend.



[This message has been edited by Mark Bohannan (edited 10-07-2000).]
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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2 posted 2000-10-07 03:19 PM


Oh, yes!!!

Kathleen


Charisma
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3 posted 2000-10-07 06:41 PM


behind closed doors......mmmm.....I can see you....through your words...

Charisma

BloomingRose
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4 posted 2000-10-07 08:07 PM


Mark~ Beautiful reply you composed.
I don't think my special one will mind too much since it was meant to compliment the sweetness of what we have.
Thank you
deb

BloomingRose
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5 posted 2000-10-07 08:10 PM


opps hit submit before I could finish thanking all of you...

Kathleen~ do I take that to mean you like?
thanks!  

Charisma~ I meant to add a little punch to it so I guess it worked.  
Thanks for reading.

Sven
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6 posted 2000-10-08 02:09 PM


This is wonderful. . .

Just wonderful. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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