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PeterPeter
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since 2000-04-11
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0 posted 2000-10-07 02:33 PM





Fire and Water



It’s just not possible
But it looks like it to me
Fire on water?
Not true - Can’t be

Who has the power?
Creating such tricks of light
If you have any doubt
Wait till night

The fire is not burning
The waters calm
So still

The gift of sight is not over
Go see if I am right
Cast your eyes skyward
On the darkest, darkest night

Appreciate all you see
It’s too hard to describe
For a mortal such as me
So much beauty abounds
You‘re alive. Make the most

But most of all
See?


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inot2B
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Arkansas
1 posted 2000-10-07 03:36 PM


Very pretty, words as well as picture.
Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

2 posted 2000-10-07 03:38 PM


wonderful display of both pictures and words

Kathleen


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3 posted 2000-10-07 03:40 PM


nice poem, it describe the picture well...enjoyed reading it  

Charisma

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