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What is Your Wish
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What is Your Wish |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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What is Your Wish Time the guide stays by our side But never says how long the ride. We stay a puppet of extreme In three Dimension plus a dream. We brook two paths, gentle and hard And the oven cooks with some lard. Tasting, wishing, dancing with wile Straining our hearts with tears or smile. We bury our treasures of awe Though know, we cannot treasures store. Yet we claw mountains to the top Seems for some sort of lollypop. Goals that we set, course straight ahead All must be done before we are dead. Strings are pulled we dance in the snow To our own music fast, or slow. Some would cut the strings of the spell Except for fear they'd go to hell. |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
quote: That reminded me of the "miles to go before I sleep" in Robert Frost's poem. I liked this poem a lot, Seymour. Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, It seems you are the only one. Love Sy |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Where did this poem come from? WE cannot plan for what we don't know. But the Brazilians have a saying that goes something like this I'll take pleasure today, because tomorrow I might be dead. They don't say anything about goals. Totally irrelevant to the beauty of your words, and everything you write is beautiful Liz |
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Fred Hobbs Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 329Tallahassee, Florida, US |
Sy, A fascinating introspective piece. I liked it and I'm not even an Elizabeth. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Enjoyed Seymour..nicely written  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, It's a good saying and I thank you for the double post. Love Sy Fred, You win some you lose some, I appreciate the read and comment. Sy Victoria, Thank you much for the read and nice comment. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Sy, You've got TWO Elizabeths to deal with here. WE're ganging up on you. The first post was my friend, Elizabeth, the second one was me. Or vice versa Wait, I'm getting confused Liz |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, I'm sorry dear it's my fault. I guess there is only one Eizabeth for me. Love Sy |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Sy.... I love to dance in the snow, especially when the Northern Lights are flashing all around me!!! I also loved this poem, as I do every single one you write........  Follow your dream! |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Marvelous, Sy - that instinctive recipe of human main course. Corinne |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* beautiful written loved and enjoyed reading it... Charisma |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunny1, No snow or nothern lights down here But I remember them well. Corinne, Thank you for the nice response. Charisma, Thank you for the beautiful. |
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