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I Feel Lousy Today
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I Feel Lousy Today |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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I felt lousy today i was inadequate to cope with this state of mind A prey entrapped within a vulnerable self In desperate need to seek an outlet, A catalyst that would allow all such bitterness to gush out, I turned to my trusty pen and pad Writing is a form of catharsis, or so they say But how do you write when you feel so frail that you cant hold your pen? When your feelings swirl vigorously to torment,leaving behind a lifeless ragdoll When all you want to do is to hide and seek refuge rather than face the pathetic you? i couldnt bear to write i didnt manage to find solace I still feel lousy [This message has been edited by kaile (edited 10-07-2000).] |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Ouch...sorry to hear that you're feeling this way, Kaile. Hope things get better. Very expressive poem. I really felt that I could relate. Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
what are you hiding from? ... what are you afraid to say? ... your pen will give you strength and clarity ... please try again ... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
kaile, I know exactly how you feel. . . strength to you my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
thank you Elizabeth.....yes, i am feeling better today  |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
kaile- wow...did you write this about me? i was right there with you today... or should i say...yesterday by now. couldn't exactly pinpoint the cause, just felt really pathetic. thanks so much for sharing this, and i'm glad you're feeling better now. -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
mA miller...now thats thought-provoking...i tried to dig deeper into my self to search for an answer but i guess sometimes you just dont have the strength to face yourself... thank you all for replying..appreciate the support |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Yes please attempt again at penning your agony. Your quill is so wonderful anyway, can you imagine the amazing piece that would flow when let out into the openness of freedom? |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Wow! I think you just wrote what every single poet in this forum has felt at one time or another, and some of us for days at a time!! I know, in my case, all I can do is just keep doin' it, and all of a sudden it breaks free. Write to us, kaile.....we'll listen! Follow your dream! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
That's it...this forum is badly in need of a party!!! TOGA'S ANYONE? Big Hugs to you kaile, I know how you feel. Hope your day gets better. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i feel lousy today too (((((hug)))))) WAIT!! the sun is shining!! the birds are singing... there's a bit of indian summer out there... i think i'll get up from the machine and go for a walk... feeling better already just thinking about it... wanna come??? oh, and your poem was right on!! yes, picking up the pen helps.... always.... which is why it's all i've been doing for the past 10 months... (((((hug)))))) thanks for sharing your feelings... that's what poetry is all about, isn't it? ~ all you can really ever expect out of life is a sincere apology and some decent poetry ~ |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i never did write about what was bothering me after all but i appreciate the support you have given me then THANK YOU for being willing to read and for your fine support |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Kaile, what happened? Why were you feeling lousy? You could've called one of your friends to talk about it. It's better than bottling it up and you couldn't even bring yourself to write about it! That is bad! _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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