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Two Poems |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion 
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Airborne Bound for home, I close my eyes - your face etched on the back of my lids, like imprint of rooftop in the memory of a birder's pigeon - your touch as deep as glacier tracks - your fragrance as fresh as a babe's first laugh - your whisper as full of meaning as the words your eyes impart. © RAM 8/31/00 Skywriter Dreamt of a skywriter he flew a path intrinsic, deep in flight the Cumulimbus gave rise to T-Storms electric, with hushed words directions relayed, prayed he’d find home. © 2000 Corinne Bailey |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
mmmm..very nice ... two spirits connected in flight ... your writing styles compliment each other very well... thanks for sharing them in this way ... take care poets jm |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hi Corinne, i always have a soft spot for short poems and i enjoyed both the efforts immensely  |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
As full of meaning, the words your eyes impart... Corinne this is a very poetic play of words. Love the way it flows. Deb |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Ah, written in the same key. a sweet symphony of thoughts. Must be an Irish symphony... Parker |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, JM, Kaile, Blooming Rose and Park. Corinne |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
two poems - two poets - I refuse to decide - I love both equally ~G~ - |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
ah, sweet poet Core thank you for a treasured and beautiful response poem.Love, Rick Thank you Janet Marie, Kaile, Blooming Rose, Parker and Wilfred |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Two for the price of one... and both equally as well done... Have I mentioned that I like your work?... I think I might have...  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Fantastic! I enjoyed these! Very beautifully done! Denise |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
Thank you, Nan and Denise! corinne |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Two excellent works well suited. Loved them both. Dee |
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RAM Member
since 2000-03-24
Posts 153 |
Thank you Nan, Denise and Dee. Rick |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Beautiful work here. I love the flow and feel of it! |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Soared with it, just soared with it! Kathleen |
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