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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-10-07 09:44 AM


Soliloquy

I shall be content
if only in my mind
because there is this,
my strength,
to carry me through…

and if I should only thus
reside in my mentality
and quiet voices,
it is my strength
and it will carry me through…

in trying to be all to
everyone I am losing out
on what I could give myself
but if I rely on my strength
it will carry me through

sometimes we have to be
selfish, a little, isn't that
correct? isn't that something
we have to rely on, our strength
to carry us through?

should I get lost, somehow,
then, in these recesses of
senses and emotions
I will then turn to my strength
and he will get me through

for he loves me, after all.




Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



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inot2B
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1 posted 2000-10-07 10:22 AM


Yes we need strength to help us make it through the day. Thank you for reminding us.
Marsha
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2 posted 2000-10-07 11:17 AM


Karilea, strength is what pulls us through. Really like this, great read and very well written

               Marsha

Sunnyone
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3 posted 2000-10-07 11:25 AM


~~ Karilea ~~
I'm so glad this was here for me to read today!!  What an ispiration you wrote, and what a message of peace within!! Thank you so much for this beautiful writing!!

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Follow your dream!



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Sven
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4 posted 2000-10-07 01:05 PM


quote:
in trying to be all to
                   everyone I am losing out
                   on what I could give myself
                   but if I rely on my strength
                   it will carry me through


this is true. . . we are driven to be there for our friends. . . but we need our strength for ourselves. . . but who do we turn to when we need strength?

Excellent my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Mark Bohannan
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5 posted 2000-10-07 03:18 PM


Yes it is the strength in each of us that will reward us in the end with the answers to our dreams as long as we weather all the storms to get there without trying to rush things or avoiding the path of what we must go through to get there.  Excellent write my friend.
JamesMichael
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6 posted 2000-10-07 09:10 PM


Yes I believe that you are correct...James
BSC
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7 posted 2000-10-07 09:21 PM


So glad to hear that that sometimes elusive strength is always there....somewhere Karilea.  Now I just have to keep reminding myself of that....Wonderful piece.  Bonnie
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8 posted 2000-10-08 09:42 AM


thank you all for you kind words...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



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