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What "Lies" Between
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What "Lies" Between |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA 
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What "Lies" Between Sitting, she reflects on her past, as the light enters her day. Wondering to where she is traveling, why it's turned out this way. Once so full of energy, some would say "hyper", still, Others, intense and moody, but always of very strong will. Life to her, an elixir, to drink from, to flourish, to feed. When stifled and smothered in falsehoods, she weakens, she falters, she bleeds. To take the innocence from her, the loving, unconditional, desire, To torment with thoughts of mistrusting, flames rise, and the heat becomes higher. Playing the odds, are no winners, each will have lost in the end. Whether husband or lover, a "player" Loses the "luster" of friend. Watching the mind's eye, her window the blueness, aware of "between". She's no one's fool, this woman, who watches as screen venoms "green". She drinks now from lies and concoctions deceit being ingredient, main. As she travels the highway electric releasing in travels, her pain. She'll discover the words that will comfort and cloak her, protect her once more, In a trust that can feed her, to nourish a loving, her heart shall endure. © M/M 10*2k [This message has been edited by MMoonchild (edited 10-07-2000).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is a great expression of the pain, Maureen with a touch of hope for better things to come. Very good! Denise |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
Playing the odds, are no winners, each will have lost in the end. Whether husband or lover, a "player" Loses the "luster" of friend. loses the luster of friend..how true.. this is deep stuff moon...very nicely written  hugs, dg she doesnt want the kind of love she can live with--she wants the kind she cant live without -clint black |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
This was very well written. Many will read this and understand your meaning. |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
Denise thank you...I wasn't going to write today but saw something elsewhere that upset me...honesty to me is something I value even more than love and there is so much dishonesty in the world both real and virtual...that is what this is meant to say... M |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
dg this was meant to be deep...as deep as someone has to go to read and understand...I probably could have been more specific but I think it is more universal this way  thank you for reading and responding ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
inot2B thank you. I hope so and if not..well you and I and a few others understand... ~~soft smiles Maureen |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Clever title, and the poem really shows your pain. Great work. Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com |
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MMoonchild Senior Member
since 2000-07-13
Posts 1715PA |
thank you Elizabeth . I really am not in pain but a state of relief at this time. ~~hugs Maureen |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Moon... Strange enuf I was in the mood 2 read something like this 2day and poof there is your poem... Thanks for sharing once again Coco |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
As we leave the past behind a new light of hope can shine for us to help us rebuild our trust and our desires...nice writing...James |
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