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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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and oh to feel the fist, ~explain~ and feel the ice of sorrow ~~rain~~ oh but it were, a theory, I'd not find you, nor you, find me. If life were logical-- -equation- we would be such a sensation... If all the numbers added up we'd have no need of breaded sup... We could feed, fulfill the need of masses, shadows of the seed.... We could do the things undone We could move the rising sun... can't you feel it? We are one. We are the Christ. The birth of son. We are, We are, the holy ones. We are, (we are) the things undone. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 10-07-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
and oh to feel the fist, ~explain~ and feel the ice of sorrow ~~rain~~ oh but it were, a theory, I'd not find you, nor you, find me. If life were logical-- -equation- =================== We could do the things undone We could move the rising sun... can't you feel it? We are one. We are the Christ. The birth of son. We are, We are, the only ones. We are, (we are) the things undone. ================ OH BABY ..sing to me sweet serenity... you just need to be kissed for this one!!! and me is walking on me lips to get there  you KNOW i love this one..right???.. yea..you know ... I am so diggin the rhythm of your rhyme.. and those words sublime ... sleep now me sweet ...you earned it *kisskiss* me loves ya .. you know this ..right?? ..yea ..you KNOW me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
.JM...you absolutely must teach me this....you've already taught me, compassion of me heart, and total loyalty, and understanding, and love that withstands the depths of human perception....NOW TEACH ME HTML!!! [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 10-07-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
OOOHHHHHH MY me sweet friend. This is one sure way to get to a cowboy first thing in the morn. Tis a lovely song from the heart of a lovely poet. Now html....didn't you get my email to you? If not then I will resend it. Along with some easy to follow instructions. Hugs to you my angel of the wee hours. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
May god bless ye, me sweet Janet Marie... more woman than I could ever be.... and should ye dare to cast a spell, pick me---have me--learn HTML.... okay, BIG GROAN...but it's a happy day...shrugs...ew...I'm 'like' all centered, y'know dude? Thank you sweetie! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
beautiful....and so true.... great writing  Charisma |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*to himself, "wow, she's even got it centered. . . who's been teaching her HTML?*  This is great serenity. . . just wonderful. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
poetry should embrace evolutionary leaps in style and i think you've made a big one with this piece, serenity ... nice work |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Sven , and Mark, thank you for noticing that this was rather different from me, in content and style, thank you also for the nice replies...Is a bit different, LOL, (I tend to look at these things symbolically...) |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
If life were logical-- -equation- we would be such a sensation... If all the numbers added up we'd have no need of breaded sup... We could feed, fulfill the need of masses, shadows of the seed.... We could do the things undone We could move the rising sun... can't you feel it? We are one. We are the Christ. The birth of son. Firstly a flood of WOW's then stunned slience. Seren. excellent poem, loved this, if only life was logical and simple sometimes. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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