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snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
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KS

0 posted 2000-10-07 02:06 AM


It seems as if
The days drag on;
The anticipated nights
Hardly exist.
But, baby,
I'll make it through
Because I know
You're around.
The entire world
Seems to go against
My routine;
All seems to contradict,
Even threaten,
My comfort zone.
But it's all right--
I can endure it all
Knowing I'll be
Standing next to you.
It's easy to go through
The hard times;
I can survive,
Just so long as
You walk beside me.


Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-10-07 07:02 AM


I know this feeling...when you have someone special and you want to always be with them...James
inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
2 posted 2000-10-07 10:27 AM


It's so nice to know that we can survive as long as we have someone next to us. I enjoyed your poem.
snowpants
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KS
3 posted 2000-10-07 10:05 PM


Thanks for reading, James!

Glad you liked it, inot2B!!

sp  

BirdeeB
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since 2000-09-16
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4 posted 2000-10-08 01:24 AM


Hey SP
thanks you for your encouragement..
That was a great poem that you wrote, i think ever one knows what its like to love some one and to have that perosn by your side
when the day is done..

"So don't judge me by my failures, only by my dreams" SR71


Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
5 posted 2000-10-08 08:21 AM


Lean where your strength is and you will always be fine.  Great read my friend.  
Paula Finn
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since 2000-06-17
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missouri
6 posted 2000-10-08 10:43 PM


sp...oh this is so sweet...to have such a love to lean on...lucky you
snowpants
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7 posted 2000-10-09 01:04 AM


BirdeeB:  glad to help anytime I can (especially with my writing!)  thanks for reading!!  

Mark:  as always, thank you for the wonderful words of wisdom.  I'm glad you stopped by and enjoyed!!

Paula:  thanks so much!  glad you liked it!!

sp  


Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

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