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Birth Of A Season
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Birth Of A Season |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
The seasons begin to change As we enter a colder range Temperatures start to fall Winds turn into a squall The trees slowly turn Their leaves will burn From a deep green To the brightest orange I've seen Some will become red Or a fiery yellow instead Before they all get blown To distant places unknown They'll be replaced in the spring As the birds return to sing A beautiful new melodic song That will last all season long Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 10-08-2000).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Lone Wolf- This is really nice. I enjoyed it alot. You've painted a wonderful picture of the changing of the season.  -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I echo vlraynes... Lovely indeedy Maree |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Beautiful write! Great illustration of the change of seasons! Loved it!! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
Ah I just love fall...though I HATE cleaning up the leaves! LOL Then again, I love every season..... So I'm wierd....  Great write here LW....thank you for sharing this one with us. ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
oooh pretty poetry nice to see you trying some new styles LW creative and imaginative work... hate when we gotta turn on the furnace ... but the leaves so beautiful ... great job later-leaf-gator jm |
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Ethan Halo Senior Member
since 2000-04-28
Posts 793on the roof again |
oooo...what a very pretty poem! i like the burning metaphor...the levels! i love the levels! it works on so many! and it's very hopeful at the end. lovely indeed. great stuff. I am reminded of the immortal words of Socrates, who said, "I drank what?" |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, Lone Wolf! Very nice! Denise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent. . . I love Fall. . . but winter will soon be here!!! Well done. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LoneWolf~ My goodness ... what a lovely palette ! I love the Autumn and the leaves of many colors. Thank you for sharing this. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
A perfect poem to drift us quietly through autumn and into winter Lone Wolf! Beautifully written with wonderful images! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
 Jennifer, Sweetheart, this is lovely!!!!! Kathleen |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
mmmm.....getting colder, when the leaves falling down, changing seasons .... you describe it so well, and it fits the colours where you have written in..... loved and enjoyed it Charisma |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Jen~ Beautiful are these words which painted a most delightful picture in my mind...well done Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Thank you to you all for reading and replying. I just write them as I see them. I love the fall and thought a poem would be an excellent way to share the beauty of it with you. Thanks again!! Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
This is beautiful! Love autumn The change of colours is a wonderful site |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
insect, ME TOO!!! LOL. They are a wonderful sight to behold. Thank you!! Lone Wolf Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
that's pretty |
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