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Ambushed [for Marge Tindal]
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Ambushed [for Marge Tindal] |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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Tears lay in < !signature-->ambush stealing my sight tears so filled in knowledge of pain my pain & now remembering it all once again all just lying there impossible to mend and oh so impossible to forget they told me time would mend it and a day would come and I would surely skip it... You know something they lied the times of years have shaped my thoughts but they bring again the pain and cost and I feel again o’er the ones I’ve lost. I have to tell you Marge You've got a heart. If I could paint a portrait, of this life in which I've led, and somehow sketch a story, of the visions in my head, I'd start out with a canvas, stretched tightly in a frame, and in the bottom corner, I'd leave room to sign my name. (Michelle A. Bartley) [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 10-06-2000).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lucky...Yes, Marge has a heart...and so do you!!! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Dale~ It's as though you are looking straight into my heart. How precious you are to me for the friendship we share. Thank you, my friend ... for cradling my tears. I love you. I know why our Rosemary loves you so. Indeed ! Love to you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
lucky- very nice write.  Marge has one of the biggest hearts in the world. HUGS to you Marge, and HUGS to you, lucky, for writing this for her. love ya, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Lucky~ Marge will be greatful for this, you've said alot here, your words tender. Love Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
I would like to thank you all... but thanks was not what I was looking for... I'm sure you all know that... I just love my friend and it's in a time she needs. She has sure been there for me and bailed me out of many a trouble (you can ask Ron or many others about that) but I have to say she sure is a giver and she does her best for all who care, and for us (me) who needed help she's always been there. much love Marge I had left out a couple of lines which I had planned to send to her but on second thought I'll give to you. There could no better ally be than she. Thank you Ron, Balladeer, Nan and all the nest for putting up with me I know your all the best. "Ambushed" Tears lay in ambush stealing my sight tears so filled in knowledge of pain my pain & now remembering it all once again all just lying there impossible to mend and oh so impossible to forget they told me time would mend it and a day would come and I would surely skip it... You know something they lied the times of years have shaped my thoughts but they bring again the pain and cost and I feel again o’er the ones I’ve lost and I just can’t e’er forget it. I have to tell you Marge You’ve got a big ‘ol Tindal heart and I love the sharing your part of it. We're missing you... [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 10-06-2000).] |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Ah, yes. Ah, yes. Your tender heart shines. The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Rosemary, you little sneek... You and Marge are two of a kind. I love and admire you both. |
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