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She Seeks The Colours Once More
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She Seeks The Colours Once More |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
For a while the colour, Seemed to drain away, And her world turned, To black and white, The only tones she saw, Was of the grey, And while the textures, Faded in a texturless world, Yet one day the colours, Seeped back into her world, And she carried on, Like she did before, And as quickly as they faded, They dissappered again, Now she seeks the colours once more. Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Maria, this is lovely. What would our world be without the color of life? Juls |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Juls - I dread to think. But thank u  Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Maria, this sounds a little depressed, "And her world turned, To black and white, The only tones she saw, Was of the grey, And while the textures, Faded in a texturless world," great expressions hope that she will find the colours soon. Hugs...Charisma |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Thanks charisma, Yes I suppose it is a bit depressing. But I also like to think theres a bit of hope in there as well Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Yet one day the colours, Seeped back into her world, And she carried on, Like she did before, And as quickly as they faded, They dissappered again, Now she seeks the colours once more. ===================== and perhaps the lesson to be learned is ... the old cliche'...dont know what ya got till its gone ... bittersweet poem of chance ... well written ...well expressed take care jm |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Life does tend to go in circles around us, doesn't it??? I like your venue here, Maria..  |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
The vicious cycle--good work, Maria. Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Janet Marie - Yeah I guess. Thanks Nan - Yes it does, but i think I've learned this time. Thank u Elizabeth - thanks to you too Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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