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CrazyPrincessAngelDevil
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since 2000-09-16
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Fitchburg, Ma, Usa

0 posted 2000-10-06 07:03 PM


Dad no one understands me
Mom and Suvi don't care
Mom doesn't care about my weight
I cry in my lonly world that I'm trapped in
No one even trying to help me out
I wanna scream I'm so unhappy
You cared about me alot
I miss you
At night no one talks to each other
We all just do our own thing
I scream because my legs hurt
Mom just cooks eats calls people
Suvi she's another story
I figure if I die
They wouldn't notice
I'm just a person;
Looking for some love
Looking for happiness in life
Looking for a dad who went to heaven
Looking for some help in life



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Moon Dust
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1 posted 2000-10-06 08:50 PM


wow I guess  I feel a similar way sometimes.
A nice collection of thoughts.

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


Moon Dust
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2 posted 2000-10-06 08:50 PM


wow I guess  I feel a similar way sometimes.
A nice collection of thoughts.

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


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