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RocketRide
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since 2000-10-06
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0 posted 2000-10-06 05:59 PM


    ….Deep in my heart
     I hope we never part
     You know this is true
     I love you

“Disjointed, did you say?
  Hmm….
  Trite?
  I hardly think so
  Wait!
  Let me try again”

   ….Far down in the trenches of the bottom of my broken heart
     I am in hopes that we will never part
     You must know how I feel, know that it’s true
     I love you

“Not beat them over the head?
But I didn’t beat anyone over the head
Britney Spears knock-off?
Now, I hardly think that was necessary
No, please!
I can do better, I promise!”

     She walks in beauty….

“Plagiarism--
What are you talking about?
           Byron?
Never heard of him….
Don’t walk away!
One more time…please…”

     When I see you,
     I have to remind my knees that they have function
     Purpose
     That at one time they could look at the opposite sex
     And still be
     Just fine….

“Better?
Not ‘excellent’?
And you call yourself a teacher….”

10.5.00
RocketRide



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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2000-10-06 06:25 PM


Rocket Ride~ I am a teacher, and with this, I'd give you an A+ !   By the way, WELCOME! I hope you'll stay and play a while.   -SEA
English Rose
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2 posted 2000-10-06 06:32 PM



No teachings from me!....I just write it how I feel it and be damned!!!

juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
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3 posted 2000-10-06 06:39 PM


Hey welcome to Passions!!! This was too fun. Loved it.
Juls

Charisma
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4 posted 2000-10-06 06:43 PM


Rocket ride Welcome  
enjoyed reading it, and it make me smile...yeah you can do better.....
a promise...so I will looking forward to see more..

Charisma

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Hurricane Alley
5 posted 2000-10-06 07:49 PM


Welcome to the family! I liked this very much and look forward to reading more from you...check your email!  
Moon Dust
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6 posted 2000-10-06 07:58 PM


That was my teacher at school, never could please her. Anyway welcome I can see your off to a good start

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


Paula Finn
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7 posted 2000-10-06 09:55 PM


Rocket...what an aweome entrance you have made...cant wait to read more...this was just too much fun...welcome to our world
Nan
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8 posted 2000-10-06 10:08 PM


... and I'm a teacher - I say it's good... Welcome to Passions, btw..
Irish Rose
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9 posted 2000-10-07 09:51 AM


Welcome to Passions!
This is so honest and open, I loved it!

Kathleen


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