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BloomingRose
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0 posted 2000-10-06 02:33 PM


The Face In The Photo


Secrets seen, understood by few
seep through a photo
black and white
colors of truth...


Reflections of passion
flames turned within

Nowhere to begin, no way to end
forever to be two souls who blend
hearts on the mend, needing a friend
nostalgic yearnings to conclude

BloomingRose





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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
1 posted 2000-10-06 02:53 PM


Deb, this is quite beautiful...thank you for posting...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22
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2 posted 2000-10-06 04:03 PM


much can be discovered in our memories
just by a moment captured in a photograph.
you've captured that well in this
softly cryptic, lovely poem.
take care
jm

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2000-10-06 05:51 PM


Nowhere to begin, no way to end
forever to be two souls who blend
hearts on the mend, needing a friend
nostalgic yearnings to conclude


By these lines it sounds as if it has already begun and looking for a more secure place to rest.  Friendship is the true test here and I will bet that your friend will help your heart mend just by standing by you.  Excellent write from you on this one.


BloomingRose
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4 posted 2000-10-06 09:40 PM


Sunshine~ Thank you  

JM~ Memories captured in a photo, or our minds are one and the same sometimes.
Thank you for reading and your kind words.
Deb

Mark~ A photo can be a window to the soul. And yes, a true friend is a rare find indeed, but can be a help in a time of need. Thanks for your wise insight in reading this.  

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