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Kiss Before Dying..............repost for Halloween .....first in my vampire series |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
A Kiss before Dying Waken “Child of Darkness” from the point of no return A soulless creature in Hell you forever burn Skin transparent pale winter white Seeks victims unsuspecting in the black of night Footprint soft and silent, never will they hear Powers from the crypt, it is you that they fear Warm flow of blood, thirst too lust Powerless to fight, relax in your touch Pounce the tiger with fangs of death Useless struggles to draw one last breath Feeds upon mortals forever stay alive Thrill of the kill in this you thrive Offer the gift, or to let die Life’s red blood wine drunk till dry The master at work chills to the bone In misery’s moon never walk alone Creatures of darkness softly sighing Forever offer a last kiss before dying It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OOOOOOOH Girl..scared of you again ... You know i love these vampy poems of yours.. post em all ...BITE ME BABY ...LOL later-bats in your bellfrey-gator jm |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Creature of darkness softy sighing Forever offer a last kiss before dying." I would never want to miss a last kiss..James |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marina~ I love this, dear! And just at the right time of year, too! You know, Lestat and Armand and Pandora and David have been some of my most favorite fictional characters of all times. Tales of the vampires always seem to lift my spirit, in a funny way. I guess I just like all things supernatural, dear!  Thank you! Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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English Rose Member
since 2000-08-20
Posts 211Berkshire, England |
Tales from the crypt eh?!! Seasonal poetry, what a great idea!!!! Can't wait for more..... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
A kiss before dying. . . a kiss before death. . . Well done. . . as always. . . my friend --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
This is why I wear turtleneck sweaters!!  |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Thanks to everyone!!! Anybody want to kiss me??? LOL  Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I'm sure that you can find plenty of people to fill that line. . . *looking at his number, "23,109"* *over the loudspeaker "number 5"* ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
What a great way to describe a vampire. Very spooky, Marina--but I think I'll pass on the kiss offer. Elizabeth Something sweet, something sort of grandish, sweeps my soul when thou art near... hedeservesbetter@hotmail.com |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Thank you Sven and Elizabeth!! Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely written..loved it.. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Marina, Now this is a poem I could really sink my teeth into .(Oh , all-righty , I know it was a bad pun ) , Good poem though ! Doc |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*over the loudspeaker* "Number 12,309" ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Victoria, thank you very much Dr Moose, Don't quit your day job!! LOL. Thank you...... Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Walking among mortal man My blood brings on a thirst My laughs of their fear as they ran When this nightmare became their worst Terrified to get away They end up in my path I say don't worry it's OK As I devour them in a bloodbath ~ Love Vampires! Great poem Marina ~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
okay so you have me very interested to say the least......well more like taken in....ya know...like well hell girl just bite me (on the neck) LOL....Loved this one my friend and I do hope that there are some sequels coming. |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Love your poem Insect!!! Thanks for the post! Mark, now where else would YOU think I would bite you??? Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
I think you should bring them all up in one compilation. So we can get a good bite of them all at once. I can't wait for the witch series.... of course i'll probably have to read them in adult...lol. James |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Wow, this was a great pre-Halloween poem you've written here...I can't wait for me like a vampire with blood dripping from his fang(ha,ha!) Thanks for sharing this dark and fascinating piece! Nathan |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
An adult witch series eh, James??? Perhaps I should do some field work first! LOl Nate, thank you! Perhaps you may like the other parts of this series too..... Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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