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juliet_2u
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0 posted 2000-10-06 11:56 AM


Romantic Bliss

A crisp breeze across gentle pond,
Hangs sweetly in the air,
In the distance two lovers lie,
On nightfall's ground.
'Neath midnight sky.

The sweetness of their love is found,
In every touch,
In whispered sound.

Each look they cling to,
In arms so tight,
Beneath full moon,
In cherished night.

Of hope and dreams,
On stars they wish,
As these lovers lie,
In romantic bliss.



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-10-06 12:01 PM


Ah Juls, all the romantics are out and about...well done!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



Victoria
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2 posted 2000-10-06 12:03 PM


lovely images..enjoyed..
Sven
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3 posted 2000-10-06 12:14 PM


Yes they are Sunshine. . . let Romance reign!  

This is beautiful Juls. . . just wonderful. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


CocoBaci
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4 posted 2000-10-06 12:19 PM


Enjoyed this one Juliet  

The gentleness of romantic bliss you have captured the essence so very well!

Coco

Trew
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5 posted 2000-10-06 03:06 PM


My, oh my....

What a beautiful poem!
Juls, that was a slice of romance well worth devouring.  It's getting pretty chilly here these days.  You just took me back to a sandy beach, overlooking the moonlit Ottawa river on a hot and starry August night.
Thanks.  I needed that.


Trev.

Mark Bohannan
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6 posted 2000-10-06 06:55 PM


Now this one really in "Romantic Bliss"....your title says it Perfectly and it is so nice to see you post one again.
Charisma
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7 posted 2000-10-06 07:01 PM


love it, and enjoyed it.....
this was sooooo romantic...and I love reading it....


Charisma

juliet_2u
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8 posted 2000-10-06 07:55 PM


Karilea, I'll be the first to admit I'm a hopeless romantic. There simply is no cure for me...lol. Your replys always touch my heart and mean so much. Thank you my friend.


Victoria, thanks so so much.

Sven, yes let romance reign. Let it rule forever. And it's easy to be beautiful and wonderful when I think of him. Thank you as always my friend.

Coco, what a compliment. That means alot. Thanks so much.

Trev, you have made my night. The every thought of being able to do that for you brought a big smile to this girls face.
And you are so very welcome my friend.

Mark, it was nice to post one again. I've been so busy. Gettin ready for my new grandaughter and tons of other stuff. Thank you as always.

Charisma, you're too sweet. Thanks so much.

Again thank you all,
Juls


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9 posted 2000-10-06 08:02 PM


"Each look they cling to,
In arms so tight,
Beneath full moon,
In cherished night."

Ahhh, truely is lovers bliss.

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


juliet_2u
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10 posted 2000-10-06 08:33 PM


Oh Maria that was too precious. Thanks so much.
Juls

BSC
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11 posted 2000-10-07 04:16 PM


Is there anything more romantic than what you have so beautifully written of here Juls?  I'm loving this one.  Bonnie
JamesMichael
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12 posted 2000-10-07 04:21 PM


Such a desirable and romantic position to be in...James
juliet_2u
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13 posted 2000-10-07 10:27 PM


Awww Bonnie thanks so much and I tell ya it sure is a romantic scene to me. Takes me back to my youth and tons of sweet memories.


James thanks so much for stoppin in. And anyone who's ever experienced this would agree with you.

Marge Tindal
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14 posted 2000-10-08 12:31 PM


Juliet~
This touches the romantic in me !
Very softly sung ...
~*Marge*~


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juliet_2u
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15 posted 2000-10-09 01:16 PM


Marge, I'm glad that side of you was touched. I happen to love all the sides if you though.
Juls

Honeybee
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16 posted 2001-08-04 09:04 PM



This is so softly romantic with great images  

Melissa~

juliet_2u
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17 posted 2001-08-05 10:42 AM


Melissa, thanks so much for your kind words.
Juls

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