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Almond Eyes and Garnet Lips
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Almond Eyes and Garnet Lips |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Almond eyes watch the tealite flicker swan river daisies dance in the breeze coralbells and wine, watermelon red grace the quaint table of the terrace she listens for the sound of his spurs in the quiescent of moonlight patiently she sips her sweet wine in the spotlight of the moon,fireflies dance to the chorus of locust while crickets chant garnet lipstick tints the edge of her goblet as the hint of citrus lingers upon her mouth but the night was not meant for love unaware his lips belong to another another not as deserving.. of his kiss Reach high, for stars lie hidden in your soul. Dream deep, for every dream precedes the goal. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I don't know if I've welcomed you to Passions, and if not welcome now! This is so lovely, Victoria, it just breathes you know? Thank you for sharing it with us. Kathleen |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
outstanding ... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Irish Rose and Ma Miller..and for peeking in today..im so glad you enjoyed.  |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
here it is, fine lady ... worth a second read IMHO ... |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you so much Ma Miller..ha ha.. Didnt mean to make you hurry with it ha ha.. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
A lovely scene you've painted Victoria...now back to the top with you, before this disappears again! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Oh yes I agree those garnet lips deserve his kiss...James |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
those garnet lips - will find another cowboy - one who will appreciate the treasure he finds. - beautiful V |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Ready.. get set.. here we go to the top ha ha not letting it out of my sight this time Reach high, for stars lie hidden in your soul. Dream deep, for every dream precedes the goal. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
nice poem..and I enjoyed reading it Charisma |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you charisma..and for peeking in today.. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Victoria--Lovely sensory picture you have painted! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Martie..glad you enjoyed... |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Victoria~ So wistfully sad ... and yet so lovely. You've tucked in some wonderful original thoughts - 'fireflies dance to the chorus of locust while crickets chant' And the tiniest thought of all - carries such an impact ... 'watch the tealite flicker' Just lovely ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Jon Mewett Senior Member
since 2000-03-04
Posts 1304 |
Lovely indeed .........quite Beautiful jon |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Marge and Jon..so glad you took time to read.. |
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