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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
temptress ... her temptress ways engulf my space their hunger felt from across this place just her glance stirs the pot boiling heartily my heart in knots her look so brief bores my way my hands now sweat from my dismay to feast my eyes upon her gate or look away to some other's wait her closeness now forbids my turn away from her most sensual burn she takes my hand begins to speak my voice awing upon defeat her touch like fires from deepest hell as she says such things that do compel "my dearest dear" with loving tone "wake up -- stop snoring or you'll be alone" M.A. Miller 10.05.00 My calling before me, let quill be my offering; For to be called poet, no greater gift to receive. M.A. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Ha ha...you caught me by surprise here..cute one Ma Miller...  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
whew.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Miller, you got me smiling on this read! A truly sweet write you've shared with us... Coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 10-06-2000).] |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
thanks all for reading ... wasn't quite sure how to bring this off, but it seemed to work ... thanks again. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
Like this one Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Mark, Very cute..lolol. I must say this is not the ending I expected..  ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love it....special the end..that sound so familiar....*lol*.. great work.. Charisma |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
MA--Great twist at the end there...enjoyed much! |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
ROTFL.... It works - It works.... Poor Temptress - She can't be held responsible for her sleepytime activities though..  |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OH Mark what a joy to see this side of you...such fun stuff LOL...wake up wake up |
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ma miller Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 806 |
thanks to all above for reading ... i'm pleased the surprise is working ... |
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