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PeterPeter
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since 2000-04-11
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British, London

0 posted 2000-10-06 09:28 AM






Our World


Our World is everywhere
Look!
Open your eyes
The Beauty of Nature
Multiplies

The hardships of life
Poverty. Scorn
Suffered by many
Brought into this World.
Only once. Born.

Be kind
Thoughtful
Most of all show respect
It costs nothing!
Says so much
And leaves. No regret.




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inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
1 posted 2000-10-06 10:39 AM


Thank you for the reminder!!!
Very well said.

Romy
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since 2000-05-28
Posts 1170
Plantation, Florida
2 posted 2000-10-06 12:29 PM


Your message is so true! Good job! I loved the format too!
Moon Dust
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since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK
3 posted 2000-10-06 01:46 PM


I agree,  I like the way you said it

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


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