Falling Dreams.... Sonnet inspired by Parker

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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-10-05 10:25 PM

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                   ~Dreams~

How sad the nights, as darkened shadows loom,
The moon in all it's glow has hid it's face.
For dreams of yesterday have turned to gloom.
Treasured memories, leave no imprint, trace.

Her hazel eyes that changed from blue to gray,
Hold back the rivers flow of lonely tears.
And yet a glint, a twinkle, seems to play
Upon your face, eyes search to quell the fears.

To wish upon a lonely star, it seems
In hopes that out there, someone captures sight.
Then two on one will reach to share the dreams
That fall below to rest upon this night.

The falling dreams once shared of yesterday
Will someday rise on high to light the way.

M(inspired)
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Victoria

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1 posted 2000-10-05 10:37 PM

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as always Mmoonchild..

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MMoonchild
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2 posted 2000-10-05 10:45 PM

lol  thank you
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Aimster
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3 posted 2000-10-05 11:43 PM

MMoonChild

beautiful sentiments from the heart! really like your work a lot girl. Keep it up!
Take care.
amy

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"

Parker
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4 posted 2000-10-06 01:35 AM

Mmoonchild, twas a lovely piece indeed. I feel very honored that my poem could inspire you to write such a beautiful piece. I flows just wonderfully and when I saw it in the replies to my poem it so much felt like a sweetened kiss.

Thank you so much for writing it.

Parker

Charisma

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5 posted 2000-10-06 03:07 AM

never heard about falling dreams, but your poem describe it well.

love these last lines:
The falling dreams once shared of yesterday
Will someday rise on high to light the way.

Charisma

MMoonchild
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6 posted 2000-10-06 05:12 AM

Amy, thank you for your kind words...inspiration goes a long way for me in writing ...especially when my own thoughts are slight...

Maureen

MMoonchild
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7 posted 2000-10-06 05:14 AM

Parker...then a "sweetened kiss" it is...thank you for the inspiration
~~softly smiling
Maureen

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Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song

8 posted 2000-10-06 05:24 AM

So nice to see you piecing together beautiful works of tomorrows smiles resting on the dreams in todays strength. Wonderful write.

MMoonchild
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9 posted 2000-10-06 05:35 AM

Charisma

thank you for stopping by to read and respond....as far as falling dreams..well maybe you are too young to have that happen and I hope it never does to you
~~smiles
Maureen

MMoonchild
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10 posted 2000-10-06 10:28 AM

Mark
loved your response thank you

Maureen

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