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djjepp
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since 2000-10-05
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0 posted 2000-10-05 05:35 PM


You brought me out
Of my shell
I'm finally happy
As you can tell

It was your voice
A very soft tone
It was my choice
To tell you on my own

You've done so much
To help me through
Your magic touch
And caring too

Now it's my turn
To help you through
As we begin to learn
Remember I love you

© Copyright 2000 djjepp - All Rights Reserved
jc_poet
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1 posted 2000-10-05 05:38 PM


Very KEWL!!!
Charisma
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2 posted 2000-10-05 06:05 PM


I am glad that you came out on your shelf...
liked it,  

Charisma

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3 posted 2000-10-05 08:56 PM


Welcome to Passions

This is a lovely piece of writing....wouldn't it be great if we could all feel comfortable enough to open up and reveal to the ones we love our inner-most feelings. Oh, listen to me...I'm rambling aren't I? LOL

Anyway.....I love this poem!!!!

Horizon
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since 2000-10-04
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4 posted 2000-10-05 09:00 PM


A wonderful Poem, very beautiful.
It's nice to have someone in your life that loves you like that.  


[This message has been edited by Horizon (edited 10-05-2000).]

Moon Dust
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5 posted 2000-10-05 09:04 PM


this is heart warming

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


The Lonely Stranger
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 361
Upstate, NY, USA
6 posted 2000-10-05 11:28 PM


djj,
   Welcome to passions, 5 replies is not enough for a first post. I liked your work and I think everyone should get another chance to see it & comment

TLS

Wesley the Blue
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since 1999-09-02
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Forest Lake, MN, USA
7 posted 2000-10-05 11:29 PM


This is a very lovely poem.  Welcome to passoins.

Keith W. Mullin

Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you.


Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
8 posted 2000-10-05 11:48 PM


~DJJ

wonderful work! true love is so wonderful! welcome to passions and i look forward to reading more of your work.
take care.
amy  

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"


snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
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9 posted 2000-10-06 12:50 PM


Very lovely poem!  I'm a sucker for romance, so, I really liked this one!
Welcome to Passions!

sp  


Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
10 posted 2000-10-06 04:33 AM


Welcome to Passions and it is so nice to see love being rewarded with love....so many times it is one sided and I am glad that yours comes from both sides of the rainbow.
Marge Tindal
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11 posted 2000-10-06 06:08 AM


DJ~
Welcome to Passions.
Hope you will enjoy the stay.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Irish Rose
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12 posted 2000-10-06 05:00 PM


Welcome to Passions.  This is sincere and nicely written.  Look forward to reading more.

Kathleen


vandana
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13 posted 2000-10-06 07:24 PM


Welcome to passions,Enjoy the read.
rosepetals25
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14 posted 2000-10-06 09:05 PM


djjepp,

    Wow.. you have read my heart.. I am sending this to my wonderful love who did exactly what this poems says.  Welcome to Passions.. I hope you enjoy it here.

~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

Dark Angel
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since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095

15 posted 2000-10-06 09:15 PM


djjepp, this is a really lovely and sweet poem, I enjoyed it much  

Oh and Welcome to Passions  

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