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jc_poet
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since 2000-10-05
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0 posted 2000-10-05 05:09 PM



If you could feel this love I feel
You would know just how much I long for your embrace
It's been just two weeks since we planned to meet
It's amazing to me how fast we got to this place

You vow to bestow your love and let it show
And hold me in your arms forever more
To be here by my side 'til the day that I die
Or until the waves don't reach the shore

You're amazing to me how you trust so freely
When our eyes have never held each other's gaze
The way you make me laugh till all my sorrows pass
And stand beside me through all the lonely days

So I give to you this love that's so true
And promise that it will never die
As I step on this plane I sing love's refrain
Knowing it will only get better with time


© Copyright 2000 jc_poet - All Rights Reserved
TerryW
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since 2000-03-23
Posts 779
Louisville, Mississippi, USA
1 posted 2000-10-05 05:26 PM


jc_poet~
    This is absolutely lovely!  Such a tender and touching piece.  Very good first post, my friend!  I look forward to reading more!!!



T

~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.

Charisma
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lost in blue pages
2 posted 2000-10-05 05:54 PM


this is really beautiful....can feel the love in your words..
looking forward to see more from you

Charisma

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
3 posted 2000-10-05 06:10 PM


Someone is very lucky to have you!
This is a beautiful piece you have
written.

juliet_2u
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since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125
North Carolina
4 posted 2000-10-05 06:23 PM


First let me say, welcome to Passions!!!...This is so tender and touching. I wish the two of you all the happiness life has to offer.
Juls

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
5 posted 2000-10-05 08:08 PM


Welcome to passions and what a loving way to make an entrance.  Will look forward to the progress of your love for one another.
Moon Dust
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6 posted 2000-10-05 08:27 PM


welcome This is beauiful, and well written

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


Irish Rose
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since 2000-04-06
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7 posted 2000-10-05 08:50 PM


Welcome to Passions!  What great flow you exhibit.  Keep writing!
djjepp
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since 2000-10-05
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8 posted 2000-10-05 10:05 PM


Thank you very much babe,  I love it

I LOVE YOU

The Lonely Stranger
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since 1999-06-18
Posts 361
Upstate, NY, USA
9 posted 2000-10-05 10:12 PM


Welcome to the board JC_. I think you will like it here. There was plenty of emotion in your first post.
SEA
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with you
10 posted 2000-10-05 10:18 PM


JC~ WELCOME!!   What a sweet way to make an entrance!! Loved this!   -SEA
The Lonely Stranger
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11 posted 2000-10-05 11:25 PM


I thought I'd send our new poster back to the top so everyone got a look at his work



Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
12 posted 2000-10-05 11:45 PM


JC~
beautiful!! welcome to passions...this is a wonderful place. much talent here...and looks like you'll be adding to that list.
take care,
amy  

"The head learns knew things, but the heart forever more practices old experiences"


snowpants
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13 posted 2000-10-06 01:22 AM


Welcome!  Wonderful first post!  I love it!  Look forward to reading more!!

sp  

Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier

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