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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-10-05 11:53 AM





Have you ever watched a woman talk?
A real woman?  Not a plastic beauty queen
but one that knows from what she’s seen;
one that also can walk the walk...
have you ever watched a woman talk?

It starts down deep with a mix of brain
A thought process that begins a refrain
deep from her diaphram, up through her throat
when she speaks to you of the words she wrote
and huskily tells you, she would say it again.

Without any deception, she’s sensuous for you
even when she recites the grocery list
because if you stroke the violin fine
as you think you can always do
then that is when you'll discover the kiss.

You thought it was just skin and soft lips
when she turns to look at you, standing there
ready to bare herself.
And her shift shifts to her hips.
But your gaze doesn’t linger there.

She’s talking, and walking, coming toward you
and your eyes are mesmerized by how the words come through
those lips, huskily, sensuously, warm and true
all of those words she saves for you.
Out of those lips, so soft, ‘tho not new.

look out, here they come upon your skin
warm and luscious, you’re melting within,
touching you here, there, can a man melt?
The lips of a woman like you’ve never felt.
Never before have you experienced such passion.

Have you ever watched a woman talk?
Have you ever watched her walk the walk?
Have you ever known such passion true?
When she gives all of this........
to you?

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Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ



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Sunnyone
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1 posted 2000-10-05 12:19 PM


~~ Karilea ~~
This is really, truly special!!! It's beautiful and spoken from a female heart, with that style of yours that I have come to appreciate so much!    
Wonderful penning here, my sis!


Follow your dream!


JP
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2 posted 2000-10-05 12:29 PM


Hmmm.... I don't think I'll view my 'honey do' lists the same ever again...


Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP

Most people would rather die than think; in fact, they do so.
B. Russell

Sunshine
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3 posted 2000-10-05 01:44 PM


Sunny1, your words are balm, thank you...

JP, I hope not!  LOL!  Thank you!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ



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