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I Didn't Mean To.... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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I Didn’t Mean To I didn’t mean to touch your heart or to make you weep and cry I really wanted you to soar and perhaps pronounce a sigh all I wanted was to give a chance for you to yet again live and breath and taste and touch and smell didn’t mean to wrap you in this spell didn’t mean to make you groan and belie the fact that you’re alone only wanted you to see the best of things right there in your own wedding ring but now you say there’s been cast a light and the shadows have disappeared in bright as the words you’ve read created a spark and there are no memories there in the dark how can I then impart that I didn’t mean to touch your heart? < !signature--> Karilea When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 10-05-2000).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Oh boy! Have you been peeking in on my e mail? lol...I swear, sunshine, this is startling and almost word for word a little something I've kept on file much too long now...think I'll keep your poem and delete the other now...thanks m'friend. |
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JP Senior Member
since 1999-05-25
Posts 1343Loomis, CA |
Positively fabulous!  Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn. JP Most people would rather die than think; in fact, they do so. B. Russell |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, OK were is the sun tan lotion. Loved it Sy |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, Sunshine.... You outshine us all with your poetic rays!! We love it!! "Here come de sun, little darlin'" Follow your dream! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful my friend. . . absolutely wonderful. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Serenity no, I haven't peeked, but I do appreciate your comments... thank you JP! Sy, the lotion, Sir, is just...over...here... Sunny1, I'm just trying to keep up with you! Sven, thank you for reading... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wow.....new favorite!!!!! Jumping up and down....arms flaying....this one is superb and though you always pen beauties...this one hits 15 on the 1 to 10 scale. Talk about reaching deep. New shelf for the addition of the new wing in my library.  |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ But ..... you did ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ummm, Mark? Do you pass out library cards? Marge, I did? Thank you...{~,^} Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Sunshine-You've managed to hit home with this one, nicely written. [This message has been edited by Gemini (edited 10-08-2000).] |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"all I wanted was to give a chance for you to yet again live and breath and taste and touch and smell didn’t mean to wrap you in this spell" Wow Karilea ... excellent writing. You've cast a spell through your wonderful words ... and sounds like you've lit a fire in the process! Great writing, loved this!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
All I can say is...wow! Excellent write! I loved it!! sp  Of all sad words of tongue or pen, the saddest are these: 'it might have been.' -John Greenleaf Whittier |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Ok - I read the poem - (loved it of course) and read the replies - Of course it may be that this is a piece of total fiction - and perhaps others know what's going on in your life - and so no one talks about the underlying message - if not fiction - are you spellbound? |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Karilea, wonderful girl, so I'll stop sending them over then shall I? Big grins I really like this, definatly a favorite. Marsha  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Gemini, Kit, snowpants, Bill, Marsha... thank you all for your comments. I enjoyed working on this one, and I am glad you found it agreeable... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?...KRJ |
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