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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2000-10-05 10:52 AM

Nocturne Opus 1

Eerie whispers wring the trees
Willful winds, flute the leaves.
Just above the rumbling dun
Of the brooks playful run.

And in the movement of grass
Muffles the muted brass.
Flavoring the wordless words
The chorusing of birds.

Sensing lays upon your skin
Sending music within
Flooding harmonies aloud
Clearing mind of its shroud.

If you've felt this opus play
The rondeau of its gay
Rode the medley of uplift
You've touched upon a gift.

You have heard the washing shoal
Echoing in your soul.

Fred Hobbs
Member

since 1999-06-08

Posts 329
Tallahassee, Florida, US

1 posted 2000-10-05 10:58 AM

A wonderful excursion Sy. I see you haven't lost your touch. Fine work. fh

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2000-10-05 11:03 AM

Sy, yes, I did...and very well, too, with your help...

and Fred, it's nice to see you...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

3 posted 2000-10-05 11:42 AM

Fred,
Thank you and it's nice to see you post again. Sy

Sunshine,
You are the water to my growth. *L*

Sunnyone
Member Ascendant

since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

4 posted 2000-10-05 12:30 PM

Sy....
Your Opus is lovely, and I can hear the classical notes floating through the air this morning......
How beautiful this is!

Follow your dream!

JP
Senior Member

since 1999-05-25

Posts 1343
Loomis, CA

5 posted 2000-10-05 01:13 PM

Fantastically writ Mr. Tabin. Positively marvelous!

Yesterday is ash, tomorrow is smoke; only today does the fire burn.
JP

Most people would rather die than think; in fact, they do so.
B. Russell

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

6 posted 2000-10-05 04:55 PM

Sunny1,
Thank you for the lovely. *L* Sy

JP,
Thank you for the fantastic.

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

7 posted 2000-10-05 06:28 PM

Absolutely superb writing
I really didn't expect anything less
I love the way you put words together
Liz

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

8 posted 2000-10-05 09:15 PM

Elizabeth,
If I could say more then thank you I would.
Sy

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