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Prism of the Heart

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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 10-05-2000 07:50 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Elizabeth Santos


Prism of the Heart

In heaven’s blue I see your eyes
Translucent jewel that mystifies
Mirrors of aquamarine
Serenity of blue and green

In radiant beams of golden sun
I see the joy that I had won
And happiness I couldn’t give up
In yellowness of buttercup

In lavender of lilacs bloom
Is held the sweet of your perfume
Forget-me-not in shades of blue
Still hold the memories of you

Your lips in moonlight’s silver glows
Your passion in the red of rose
In lily’s wings of yellow cream
The softness of a lovely dream

In copper tones of twilight’s gold  
In ginger aureates of old
In bronzing memories of the past
A love that will forever last

Elizabeth Santos


[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 10-05-2000).]
© Copyright 2000 Elizabeth Santos - All Rights Reserved
Marsha
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Elizabeth, this is so well written, I really like it. It's so delicate, a blending balance of beautiful words and images. Really nice.
Take care
                      Marsha
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Yes, you've captured the essence and magic of a prism, just so...

it's lovely, Elizabeth, very lovely...

Karilea
When you want to be loved, look within...KRJ

2dalimit
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Thank you for the lovely RAINBOW of LOVE.
Melton
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 10-05-2000 10:49 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Elizabeth,
We love you too. Sy Another clasic.
TerryW
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5 posted 10-05-2000 11:03 AM       View Profile for TerryW   Email TerryW   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit TerryW's Home Page   View IP for TerryW

Liz~
    My dear friend, this is too beautiful to put into words.  you always manage to take my breath away, dear.  I like!  I like a lot!



Love Ya~



~you reached inside, you touched my heart,
and I am all the better for it~
Terry A. Woodson, Jr.
Fred Hobbs
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Elizabeth, this is lovely!  A pleasure to experience.

fh
Mark Bohannan
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May I simply say "AWESOME" and get away with it????/
Kit McCallum
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Incredibly beautiful words
and so amazingly picturesque!

Wonderful Liz!

Best wishes,
/Kit
Honeybee
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Sighs, this is so incredibly lovely!  

Melissa~
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a pallete of beauty here...glad i"m going back into the pages
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I love it when you paint with your words lady!
 
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