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A Feeling called Love
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A Feeling called Love |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A feeling called Love Sweetheart I know you know that feelings come and feelings go and some feelings stick around and grow. I am aware how much you care. When you reached out to take my hand I began to understand that you need me perhaps as much as I need you and now no matter what you say or do I will not let go of all my feelings for you. All my feelings are wanting you to want me too and needing you in all they do and just a little caring from you could make a really special feeling called Love come true. Jameslee@October05,2000 |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
darlin James...we are on opposite ends of the rainbow and I couldnt be happier for you...what a truly lovely write |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
"All my feelings are wanting you to want me too and needing you in all they do" Beautifully expressed James ... such sentiments can only come from truly genuine and heart-felt emotions, you've captured this well!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I am touch by the way of your expression, can't say nothing more than *wow* ....once more again... Charisma |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
James, reach out and touch James! Very well written, captured your feelings beautifully. I really like this, and I hope you find that for which you await. Take care Marsha |
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Wesley the Blue Member
since 1999-09-02
Posts 426Forest Lake, MN, USA |
I absoluely loved this one. It is so true. Love is the most wonderfull feeling in the world. Keith W. Mullin Even in the darkest night, someone will be there holding a candle for you. |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
That is exactly the feeling called love. You did an absolutely beautiful job describing it. Abra "So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains And we never even know we have the key." -Already Gone, The Eagles |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Well-written, well-expressed and a wonderful poem, James....keep on doing what you do because, you do it very well! Nathan |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Sounds like someone has finally found one that deserves him. Beatiful write from you and it shows the purity of you love for her. |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
This is very sweet Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Paula, Kit, Charisma, Marsha, Keith, Abra, Nate, Mark and Maria for the wonderful comments. I Loved reading them.. Paula nice to know we are connected by a rainbow...Love will happen for you...James |
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