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The Road To Forever |
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eyesplus2 Member
since 2000-03-02
Posts 163australia |
Two who meet on the road........... Acquaintances are....... Acquaintances who enjoy the road........... Friends become....... Friends who have a spark ignite their hearts true........ Lovers do they become....... Lovers who pledge their lives forevermore.......... Married do they unite......... Married couples who remember the most important lesson of all......... Friends are they on the road to forever.......... |
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Waverly917 Member
since 2000-09-23
Posts 90Hugo, MN |
Friendship is how it starts and how it should always continue, even for a married couple. How beautiful. Abra "So often times it happens that we live our lives in chains And we never even know we have the key." -Already Gone, The Eagles |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I think that a friend is probably the best road map we can have down any road, I really liked this one. Kathleen |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
ah, I like this one  Sometimes you have to let go and move on, But never let go of the memories. |
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angelswing Senior Member
since 2000-02-10
Posts 705United Kingdom |
Nice one, That's a great twist on that poem, realy clever, I expecteded it to end with a nice corny romantic line, but instead you managed to put a lot more depth and meaning into it . I enjoyed it . Thanks . L.of.L. Tom . Don't try, do or do not, there is no try . - Master Yoda - |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Any true relationship should always have the friendship above all. Great read...really liked this one. |
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