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MMoonchild
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0 posted 2000-10-05 05:05 AM




~Once Upon A Time~

I felt the heat
as your memories
swept over that part of me
touched by your kisses,
whispered, in the shadows of the dark.

I felt each thought
bring me to the edge,
rise me to the soaring heights
of a ~once upon a time~
shared, come each break of dawn.

As the moments collect,
each thought erases
the unmistakeable feelings,
still holding back
the desires of the past

Leaving behind the memories
of warm eyes that gazed upon
and heated the landscape,
fertilized by a voice from
~Once Upon A Time.~

Maureen
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Parker
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1 posted 2000-10-05 04:59 PM


Maureen, very lovely writing. Drew me in, are you free tonight to talk about it.  

Parker

MMoonchild
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2 posted 2000-10-05 06:22 PM


hmmm Free....if that means  have I something planned for tonight...or am I alone....or ???...the answer is I am my own free spirit now...yes
thank you
Maureen

juliet_2u
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3 posted 2000-10-05 06:33 PM


Maureen, you got me with this one. It brought back a few memories of my own. Very moving, thanks for sharing it.
Juls

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4 posted 2000-10-05 07:02 PM


yeah I like this one

Sometimes you have to let go and move on,
But never let go of the memories.


MMoonchild
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5 posted 2000-10-05 07:06 PM


thank you Juls for reading...some days I have to release my emotions and I have no idea where the words come from
~~soft hugs
Maureen

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6 posted 2000-10-05 07:08 PM


thanks Maria  

~~soft smiles
Maureen

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